Looking forward to feed back please · 7:47am Dec 27th, 2012

Well I have this new idea for a story, but I want to hear what my readers think before I get started.
I'm thinking about doing a story in the Fallout: Equestria universe, BUT!!! THERE IS NO DIRECT COLORATION TO MUCH OF FOE! So it's no wear near like the thousands of "side fics." The only thing in common is the fact that their currently at war and they do discuss a few FOE events.

Here's the basic plot.

One year after the massacre at Littlehorn, and the start of the war, a Zebra Empire attack vessel (can't decide on submarine or ship [leaning towards sub]) sits of the far eastern coast of Equestria. It's mission is simple, listen for any enemy broadcasts and relay them back to the Empire of Zebras. The captain of this vessel is a zebra dead against the war. He is simply appalled by what has happened in Littlehorn and can no longer stand by his country's actions. He and many others among the crew plan to defect to Equestria. The ship's XO (2nd in command) is a determined patriot from the Eastern Zebra Empire. When the war first started his hometown (as well as many others among the crew) were right on the front lines. Many of their friends and family were killed in this conflict. He plans to start a mutiny, take the ship, and use it's 120 Balefire warheads against every major city in Equestria. Now it is up to the captain and his half of the crew (and maybe a few ponies from the main six) to stop the XO from unleashing an unimaginable holocaust upon both countries.

Sort of a Red October and Crimson Tide crossover.

Now if someone could shorten that and make it look a lot cooler I'd be very happy. Also side note; I suck at descriptions.
But anyways, what do you think? Is it a good idea or bad? Again, it has nothing to do with much of FOE. The only similarities are the weapons, war, and one event. No Equestrian wasteland and what not.

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