SIN - new story

My newest story is SIN, currently unpublished, but also nearing completion. I've decided to add a password because it's been forever since I've done anything productive that was decent.

Here's the story, the password is 'chrysalis', and don't post spoilers if you read it. Parts may be revised or changed upon completion.

Hope you like it.

Yeah, merry Christmas, have a horribly sad fanfic.

Comments

[Fluttersyke]

it's been forever since I've done anything productive that was decent.

I seem to remember a tale with racing, and rain, not too long ago
Which, of course, shall be read as soon as possible! :3

Yeah, merry Christmas, have a horribly sad fanfic.

Oh you...
Don't mind if I do, later today!

[Fallen Knight]

Ill just wait for you to finish it so i dont spoil it for myself.

[canonkiller]

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Eh, I cranked out Racing in the Rain to fill a gap. Could've done better.

[Fluttersyke]

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Well still, it was something productive!

Oh yeah, and I happened to begin reading your passworded story. Against my better judgement and sleep needs.
Looks interesting and fun and sad!
But I did notice some errors, nothing major but a fresh eye might get them faster :)

Her people were falling the the thousands

Would you like me to keep track as I read?
I-if um.... if you want... and er-if that's okay with you?
Just asking, since I'll read it anyhooves.

[canonkiller]

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Yes, it'd be great if you found the stuff like that. There shouldn't be a lot, but I was typing some pretty late
It will only get sadder.