Chapter 7 is done! rewrites still in progress. · 10:31pm Dec 29th, 2023
Before I upload chapter 7 I will be finishing up the other chapters' rewrites. Mostly tweaks, and changes and some additions to the narrative at large in some areas.
Here's a spoiler for chapter 7:
“Budgie?” He called out to the harpy.
Budgie let out a loud gulp. “Y-yes?”
Pardon him for his French. “What in the actual f!@# is that?!”
Wandering Prey's rewrite progression is dependent upon how many narrative mistakes are made, and whether or not the flow is disrupted by a little too much telling rather than showing. I think what is written, for the most part, is acceptable at best. But it can be a bit better with a bit more descriptors.
As stated in an earlier update: Lucien has been adjusted out of the narrative in favor of a more unsavory character.
Sorry if this is taking so long.
Appreciate y'all for being patient!
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