NEWS FOR: Power corrupts absolutely

I just want to say that I'm redoing chapter 2. I will keep the original up for now until the new version comes out.

The reason for the change is that I want to do things purely my way. I originally intended to make this story a more detailed version of the story InvisiShimmer as well as a continuation of that story. That is still the case of course, but I want to do things a little different for when Sunset goes to Fluttershy's house.

If you read the second chapter and saw how it ended, then you already have a clue for what my plan is for the new version.

Comments

[OP Omni God-Emperor Doom]

Okay.

[ChazMLPFIM]

Ok. What about the new version of OBJECTION!!!!!! Spike's Sacrifice Was Completely Unnecessary (The Retrial) story?

[Mpony1]

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Still working on it.

Though technically, I can post at least the first 2 chapters up right now if I wanted, but I need to go through it to make sure everything is in order as well as make a few changes.

[ChazMLPFIM]

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Ok. Can you post the first 2 chapters?

[Mpony1]

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If I don't do it before I have to leave for work, I'll definitely do it tomorrow. There are still changes I want to make.

[ChazMLPFIM]

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Ok. I'll wait until tommorow

[ChazMLPFIM]

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How is the first two chapters?