Update · 10:36pm Sep 13th, 2023
Little bit of news. I know I've been excited since I got my glasses and so I'm writing again. Still am! :D I got chapters seven and eight up of Equestria Broken recently.
However, I've looked back on my story and every time I try to reread it for myself I get the super cringe so I've been thinking... If I get the cringe from reading my own story what's to encourage people to read it? Well, nothing to be honest. I know I LOVE my characters (If I didn't I wouldn't have gotten a $500 plushie of Clout lol) and I know exactly where I want my story to go but the way I'm writing is what I don't like. With that I've decided to, yet again, do a rewrite. I want it to be perfect this time. The story itself wont change, at all, just the style of my writing will. At the suggestion of a good friend I have started to delve into the writing style of first person instead of third. I have honestly never written in first person before and I'm not sure what I'm doing exactly. I have rewritten the first chapter, splitting it in two to make for easier reading, and I notice I keep doing past tense instead of current tense. Whoops lol So I'm going to post the first chapter (Now the first two) and y'all tell me what you think. I'm going to continue on with the rewrite and then get your feedback in order with the edits before I post any more. Also, I finally decided on a proper name for it instead of the random nonsense I was using. Rather then Equestria Broken, it is now MLP : Shattered Heart. It's a double entendre. One is the crystal heart from the Crystal Empire has been shattered, second is Clout himself. I thought it was clever lol
Also, I finally worked out a story for my oldest OC, Tigermon. Once a Gatomon recolor from Digimon but over the years he has changed into his own creature. I had an idea rolling around in my head, fleshing it out but I wasn't exactly sure how to start. I had trouble trying to figure out how to get my digidestend from the human world to the digital world. I was thinking some kind of power surge at the mall or something because they're all different economic classes that go to very different schools but I didn't really like that idea. With the suggestion of first person, I knew where I wanted to begin. The first chapter is posted to both my DeviantArt and my Wattpad. It's called Digimon : Contrary Forces. If anypony's interested in reading it, just follow the links below to whichever site you'd prefer.
DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/gutterratt1213/art/Digimon-Contrary-Forces-982415352
Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/story/351886897-digimon-contrary-forces
Toodles! :)