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  • 3 weeks
    The Tale of Two Sunsets: Fun Facts! #3

    Please feel free to ask any non-spoiler related questions about the story, anything else you'd be curious about, and I might answer them in the future in this particular format.

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  • 4 weeks
    Chapter 42 Remastered Illustration

    Updated the illustration of Chapter 42, not only because I felt that the original version's background seemed a little too bland, but because it didn't really fit in with the context depicted within the chapter, making it seem a little out of place.

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  • 5 weeks
    Predictions?

    I kinda wanted to get an idea on how the audience is thinking the story will go, with the chapters already published so far. To put it into perspective, I already have every chapter and plot arcs planned out up until Pony Sunset is ready to go back to the Human World, after solving everything in Equestria. Past that is still undecided at the very moment.

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  • 8 weeks
    Feedback Check For Earlier Chapters

    You might've noticed that Prologue and the Chapters from around 1-20 are overall pretty short, especially in comparison to most recent chapters. Due to this, do you personally think there's more I could add in those chapters, or do you feel that they still flow well with the rest of the story, despite their notably shorter length?

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  • 11 weeks
    Do You Appreciate The Diversity?

    I'll be shortly releasing a new chapter soon, possibly tonight, but I'd like to take a quick moment and ask.

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    4 comments · 157 views
Apr
19th
2023

Rainbow Dash is intentionally "out of character" · 1:24am Apr 19th, 2023

I feel something definitely needs to be addressed in regards to the last chapter. There's definitely quite the mixed result as far as feedback in regards to how Rainbow Dash was written, and how she was "flanderized". To avoid a further misunderstanding, please understand that she was INTENTIONALLY written out of character, because it'll serve a legitimate purpose in an upcoming chapter. Without spoiling anything, let me just say for the record, I KNOW what I'm doing, and the fact that you believe Rainbow is out of character is GOOD, because that means I did a good job in making you believe something that isn't as it seems. I had this planned for quite a while now, so you must bear in mind that my next chapter will make everything make a lot more sense.

Comments ( 6 )

Hmmmm, interesting I am willing to see what's what.

If that's the case then I'll take a step back and withhold my overall thoughts on this plot line until everything is resolved.

If my comments on the most recent chapter came off as overly aggressive then I apologize, I've just had several bad experiences where writers will purposely make Rainbow Dash insufferable just for the sole purpose of "taking her down a peg" even when it's not warranted.

I guess there was a knee-jerk reaction that even I didn't know I had.

I just hope that the reveal can help me clear my mind of this.

I'm already starting to see what could be going on and it intrigues me.

Let's just say I have a feeling that a Pegasus Pony is gonna get in a heap of trouble soon.

Hmmm, interesting. I'm very curious to see what you have planned. Keep up the good work 🙂👍

Clever work, mate. Very clever

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