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Black--Soul


German , Trying to write something worth while. Everyone start small after all. Enjoy the Story fellow Bronys (^///-///^)/)

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  • 1 week
    Really bad news, request for help!

    There was a error in the editing of the chapter 7 of my Marksaline story.
    The result was losing the chapter content.
    Has anyone a copy of my Marksaline story stored somewhere?!
    Otherwise the chapter 7 is lost...

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  • 2 weeks
    I am in a naughty mood~♡

    The titel already giving you hopes?
    Time to continue the Changeling Empress adventure.
    Some clop, tons of proofreading, continuation of the storyline.
    Also I see i just made 1 update 2023 for that story.
    Really wasted that year working to hard...

    Anyway...

    I proofreading recently alot of my stories, fixed a lot of typos even after years... :facehoof:

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  • 2 weeks
    Update and accidentally publishing

    Chapter special:
    Pantyhose Warrior - 'The Bad Dragon' is a Breezee?

    The over 7000 word chapter isn't done, I miss clicking. The editing button is still without space beside the publishing one :facehoof:

    Mostly proofreading and some line I have to change up near the end. Probably editing some humor in as well.

    Perhaps done in a hour. We shall see.

    Stay snuggly :pinkiesmile:👍

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  • 3 weeks
    New story is out

    This will be a side project, but two other chapter are mostly done, awaiting brain bleaching proofreading.

    I am currently editing my Gray story next chapter.
    It's a special giving introduction to multiple characters and add three side Characters to the story.

    Three Author's will have their user name as Character name, two mostly because the third is slightly tricky to use.

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  • 7 weeks
    Very sad to see a favorite story be canceled

    Andrew Joshua Talon, he just left the community.
    Since 2012 activ and one of my favorite stories
    Short Hand
    The sequel to
    The Stars Revolt!
    Always sad to see a magnificent Author go.
    He will be dearly missed.

    I legitimately have tears in my eyes...

    Stay snuggly :pinkiesad2:

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Mar
16th
2023

News for my readers · 1:45pm Mar 16th, 2023

This is a fan video for the 35 franchise anniversary.

Enjoy ♡

Further my Crossover chapter with the
Guest Author: BeastBrony

From the Displaced story: Specimen 6

Is coming along well.
We write this weekend together.
But here is a teaser of my rough story chapter script of the story:
[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'

It is currently over 11.000 words long and growing :rainbowderp:


Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'

Chapter XXX - Crossover - Six, Cynder and Spike in: Save the element bearing ponies 1.0

By: Black--Soul

Inspired by: harlock5399

From the story: Reborn as a dragon

Guest Author: BeastBrony

From the Displaced story: Specimen 6


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Early in the morning did Cynder got up with Big Macintosh, Applejack, Bright Macintosh and readied for eatch of the earthponys a wagon to transport all the gemstones that Rarity would have located for them all.

Early that week Rarity had proposed a deal where Cynder and Spike would dig out gemstones for her after she had located them with her special cutie mark magic that was uniquely qualified to find specific gemstones in areas that relatives of the Pie family clan had cultivated.
It was astounding how mutch half a year work of a Pie family clan member could cultivate.

Apperently did their far distance relation to the lost Crystal Empire is still running the strongest in all of Equestrias clans thanks to selective breeding.

Unfortunately did a thousand of year of selective breeding within 20 generations that keep exclusively mating within this pool, made them decrease the stallion birth rate.

Ignius Pie was the last stallion of the Pie family tree and with his currently 120 years of age, did the earthpony stallion had passed his prime.
Even if he would be lucky enough to life up to the 200 year limit, would he only be able to sire to his 150 year of his life or run the risk dying mid rut due to heart failure...

Since he was the last stallion of his bloodline with remarkable earthpony gemstone cultivation affinity, would Equestria not for to mutch longer be the world's biggest gemstone delivering nation overall, after the Diamond Dogs and Gemstone Wolves of Gem Fido.

Just like Gem Fido bearly has any left in general if it's wild Gems grown deposits very soon run exhausted.
After Gem Fido was so hole filled that it nation wide collapsed, probably causing the big world shaking earthquake.

Good riddance to their greedy paws having literally destroyed anything below sea level with hundred of thousands dead by being crushed to death by tons of tons of earth and common stone collapse over them in Gem Fido.

But Gem Fido had the mining race and population willing to do it, while Equestria had a lot of gemstone rich grounds to search through.
With a lot of regulations and safety precautions would it work out for both races.

So Princess Luna and Celestia negotiate a truce between the mining doggos and the Equestrian territorys.

As long Diamond Dogs accepted 30% as full payment of all gemstones found within Equestria having first pick after the rough sorting of the magical rich minerals, would the Gem Fido population have a lot more to their own, than they had in the last 500 years of their depleted nation grounds.

What was easy to see as Cynder and Spike in less than 8 hours work had proven. The three apple-pear family wagons full of gemstones showed how easy non mining races could get rich fast. They pre sorted upon digging up stones of value and raw metal stone ores.

A extreamly lucrative business for everyone involved. Spike and Cynder would take low market value gemstones as snack and selling the rest of their share to trade in gold coins and silver slivers to consume at a later date.


After getting Rarity home with her share in her home underground vault deposited, did the apple-pear earthponys went back to the farm to bring their share to the Orchard and its own underground vault.

Upon reaching the farm grounds did to their euphoria of their successful day was dampening through dismay, when they see that it was once again time to clean up the unwelcome mess of vandalized farmgrounds. To be more specific, to clean up the shit dragons dropped mid flight.

There was roughly a group of 50 adolescents dragons that came out of their way to fly to the Apple-Pear Family orchard to have a literally shit mid flight to drop on their grounds.

These punks really needed a good beating and some decent hobbies...

That particular dragon clan was about to be evicted from the Everfree Forest ground and anything near the apple-pear family grounds, thanks to a royal decreed court case banishment of this trouble some clan of dragons.

If the clan made out of 'terrible terrors' exclusively, had not followed the peacefull way, would they be finding themselves removed by force.

Usually most people don't want to be hunted in any way, but this clan was apperently not just thick in the head, but also slightly suicidal in the shit they pulled occasionally.

Seen by the fact that they settled 5 years ago with 477 clan members that got killed off by Equestrian forces down to the 50 remains of their clan.

Without a adult that was leading to the worst outcomes, did the adolescents at least had reduced their activities to...
Well...
Shit mid flight over Equestrian population centers...

What made their shit pranks the worst was that they got proficient at hitting trees so that it splattered all over it.

Not to mention the apples and other produce of the orchard. They be all a lot more happy once than clan was evicted peacefully or hunted down to their last. As long they dissappeared finally.

It was hard to clean up with how much there was, but unicorn support got it done. Unfortunately did it contaminated the apple trees with non earthpony magic. Once more would the population of Griffonia get a huge shipment of lower priced high value apples it seems...

Since Spike and Cynder had already worked hard for hours, did the Apple-Pear parents decided to give Cynder the rest of the day off.
Cynder used her free time to in turn treat Spike for ice cream and fish pizza.

While Cynder really had only one thing planned in general, lick Spike clean of his scale gem polish.
That stuff usually tasted good on its own, but on Spike it somehow was like licking the best ice cream flavor of the hole world.

While Spike occasionally complained to have always to reapplying the scale gem polishing, did he never complain to Cynder to stop removing it with her tongue.
So both had something out of this arrangement.


Spike and Cynder walked through town looking for something that they might find fun to do.
While the Ponyville arcade was coming to mind, did the open air arcade place was swarmed with tourists today.

So they had to find something else to do together.

When they walked passed Lyra Heartstrings and not so secret anymore retired Black Hoove Agent Bon Bon. They could fortunately hear out a interesting fact walking by:

"Hey, have you heard a noble came into town a few minutes ago?" I heard the mint colored mare ask the candy colored mare as both dragons passed them by.

A noble was apperently in town,that particular nobel had been seen over the last two years more and more over from Canterlot to Ponyville.
While many wonder what somepony from Canterlot is doing here other than to settle near the apple-pear family clan with the Alpha stud Bright Macintosh that is rumored to have sired Celestias colt so many years ago.

While many started to catch on that Prince Solaris Blueblood looked more and more like her personal advisor Silver Tongue.
While it was inevitable that the secret come out, was perhaps not just 'Pear Butter Cup Apple' to buck thirsty mares of her stud muffin.

Something non specific that had been said when Cynder hear somehow something resonate in her head as she kept walking, but her curiosity got awakend so she could not just leave it be.

The best of her know what let the dragon hord instincts flair up without clear cause, so she turned around and asked:

"Sorry for butting into your conversation, but do you know where the noble went?" the dragon female asked the mares Bon Bon and Lyra.

"I believe he went to your place Cynder, he was apperently today visiting all element bearing ponies. Something about his son and family business or something like that." Former agent Bon Bon told Cynder as they started walking away.

Spike had noted only just now that Cynder had stopped for some reason on walked over.

"Something happend? Anything to alleviate our boredom?" ask Spike.

Cynder nodded and told Spike what the mare couple had told her.

So Spike suggested:

"We should head back, this noble might cause trouble when Bon Bon mentioned him specifically."

Cynder thought the same. As the two adolescent dragons spread their legs out before hurrying back home.
As both started to head directly back home, did both had somehow the feeling that some storm was coming up. Unfortunately did these two had been more often been right than they liked to.

Cynder couldn't think why a noble would be here, but she would find it out soon enough and care to distance that nobel pony fromany funny business if need be.
If he would be causing trouble because once more she, Applejack or Cadance are not interested in a marriage contract, then he'll have to deal with the royal sisters soon enough.

Not the first time a Canterlot noble didn't take repeatedly 'no, not yet, they are way to young for that' as a reason to stop bothering them.
But nothing a little persuasive talk of the royal family could not fix in a surprisingly short time.

What would it be? 24 or the 25 nobel family clan that had to be 'ask to leave it be'.

Some noble ponies just didn't otherwise quit it.


Cynder could already feel something in the air that put her on edge coming near the over the years well grown farm house of the family clan she was part of.

Cynder started to sneak towards the main entrance and could hear a conversation.
While muffled by the new heat isolation, did the talking inside was still good enough to understand for the predator hearing of Cynder.

Someone male happened to believe his son would be a perfect match for Applejack since they're just about the same age, (what 12 years of difference was for Equestria standards actually counted) and he'd be no stranger to hard work, physically or magicaly as a bicorn in specialty in rare metal location. The nobel voice with verbal accessories said to the adults and the eldest of the apple-pear family clan.

Cynder quietly walked in, her sneaky nature paired with her concealment spell she learned whan she wasn't even 6 years old, really helped her sneaking around everywhere despite her no longer being as small as she used to be.

Bright Macintosh and Butter Cup reminded the nobel pony that it was not really theirs to decide what their daughters would make with their romantic lifes. Especially since she didn't reached her 30 life year and be officially declared a adult and make her way through her life as she deemed fit.

Her mom say that Cynder especially was not ready as the noble pony suggested, with her being still not molted and having reached her adolescent stage with her puberty kicking in and have real mare talk and heat season problems.

At least at that the nobel pony agreed that Cynder probably was off the table, as long she was still physically out of any libido activities area of interested in either gender.

Cynder peeked into the living room. Despite her big frame was she thanks to her concealment spell impossible to spot as long she kept out of the way and near to a wall or hanging on the ceiling.

When her father, mother and grandmother talked with Applejack present to the nobel pony. Applejack sat in front of a unicorn stallion that had a bicorn son.

Both his eyes could be seen in a small wall mirror to be ruby or crimson red and his mane were the color of golden amber.
While his fur was a very dull gray, what might be a symptome of late stage healing of parasitic dark magic influence. Many ponies that had survived 20 years or longer with the deadly magical affliction that could be healed with Cynders help. What seem a bit off was his cutie Mark, it was a pile of gold that had faded colorations.

Usually that was fixed once the parasitic infection was removed from one's body.
Strange that a purging of the affliction had not fixed it.
Unless he might be a active dark magic user?
Many healed by her had been questionable blessed with the dark magic affinities.

Most often used to reduce transportation with dark shadow portals or more common, shadow walking with a long red cape to hide boxes in to move smaller things around.

The shadow porting of boxes and paper messages had been giving the normal post offices a run for their money lately.

Butter Cup told the noble stallion that she was sorry, but if Applejack said 'no', than it was not meant to be 'maybe i changed my mind tomorrow'. Even if she did, nothing would stop her from contacting his son on 'Gold Rush' on her own.

Interesting name, in fact he was a retired politician like all her former school teachers had been, but unlike them he had used his connections of old to get a hoove in the market of Equestrias national trading.
For once a noble stallion that would give their family actually a boost in reputation.

Usually it was a 5th or 4th noble house that tried to reach 3th rank by marriage into their family clan, as sole apple zap products selling and generally apple focused wares to Canterlot and Ponyville.

Interesting to actually having a noble house coming for them that had something else than a seed provider to offer.

"Thank you for your consideration mister Rush, but I can't accept this proposal as i already have my eyes on somecreature else. And no it isn't Princess Celestias son. Solaris Blueblood is like a second brother to me."
Applejack said while making clear that all the rumors of her and Cynder going after Blueblood was just that, rumors.

Cynder was shocked, she just stepped into a magical mouse trap. Also because Applejack usually talked with her and Cadance about 'filly stuff'.

Cynder know that Applejack had a thing for the rainbow stunt mare and the Pie mare living in sugar cube conor, but she had a crush towards a male? This was brand new information.

Cadance would looove to hear about it.
The ship-o-holic known as Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, was a Griffon who just seem to hate the idea of anyone being singel.
She had once declared war towards the singel status and despite being ironically still singel herself, made a lot of singels into a pair or herd / flock.

That eageless was eager and bloody scary sometimes...

Cynder had no doubt what the stallion thought about rejection towards his house, just like everyone before them.
She almost saw the stallion smile quiver in hidden rage, but something told her it was unexpectedly unnoticed by their usually very observant family.

This might need Chrysalis Black Hooves to check them for mind magic. While unlikely, was it not the first time somepony see himself entitled enough to haven been watched by the ever present Black Hoove Agents to charm the earthponys.

Short to say, the unicorn has no longer a horn to speak of and enjoyed his second and permanent stay in Tarterus for life this time.

"Oh I had kept my eye on you for a year now and thought you were single just like the other mares my son hopes to get herded together.
What is this stallion's name? Perhaps for the mares involved we can get my son to agree to share a herd, double the fun for the mares after all." Golden Rush asked.

While Bright Mac didn't like that mister Rush has been watching Applejack,did Butter Cup and Granny Smith had been giddy for Applejack to potentially score two stallion's! That would be at least 2-4 foal from Applejack later on from eatch stallion for their clan.
A rare and most delightful prospect for any mare!

"What do you mean you've been keeping your eye one her?" Bright Macintosh asked angrily, but Gold Rush stayed calm and giving a smile to the stallion that could fold him in half 14 timed in a row, a confident answer.

"I mean nothing bad by it, there have been a few cases where mares marry into noble houses only to get a position of power, more easy so if a colt / stallion if offered for a noble family to do the same just with the genders reversed.
So i keep an eye on those that catch my son's attention to see who's good for him and ideally benefit the clan with strong genetics or other benefits. Your a father yourself sir, surely you can understand my worry to keep gold diggers and geese out of my clan unless thry have sufficient positive aspects for my sons well being and happyness." Gold Rush said calming to their father, as he nodded in understanding.

They all had been unfortunately to mutch experience with that kind of pony. A by now prominent but not less disliked example was like Rarity Element of Harmony was after Solaris Blueblood because of his looks and her easyer access to exclusive markets of the 3th to 1th nobel houses.

Cadance had almost ripped the mare a new one verbally as she had no more feelings in her for her precived second brother than a school yard crush, still wanting him exclusively unshakeable to herself.

Cadance lost a primary and two secondary feathers that needed to regrow, whole Rarity had lost 1/8 of her tail and mane length that needed to grow in again.

Easy to say that Rarity was while tolerated for her past actions and services for everyone's well being, was still on Celestias watch list for mare to keep away from her son and shit list of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza.

Rarity was no shallow mare. Generously and forthcoming in general, the mare just had to high standards for herself and others she wanted at her side.

Rarity wanted the access for exclusive markets for example to buy rare wares, while she could sell it to the same price at less privileged creatures so the fashion world would profit overall from it.

Yak fur and Yeti fur was well processed smooth as silk, while keeping anyone even in minus 40 celsius toasty warm.

One more fact why Celestia tolerated Rarity.
She had a good heart, but needed seriously work on her standards and keeping a mind open for herding. Especially since Celestia wanted a extended family that Luna and Nightmare Moon could groom to be like the nobel ponies of old:

- Smart through studying.
- Well trained in physical aspects for health and bedroom performances.
- Kind and generous towards others.
- Honest and loyal to one another.
- Someone with honest smiles on their lips, in private.
- With the spirit of cooperation and friendship towards non ponies.

"While I don't like that you had been watching my daughter, i can't argue with that since we are basically doing the same." Bright Mac said as he took a deep breath and swelling down his muscles to half their thickness to look less intimidating.

"Well to answer your second question, i don't want to say his name, who knows if someone wouldn't try ruine it for me, to give his son better odds?" Applejack told him before a deep blush turned her orange head beat red.

Again did Cynder saw his smile twitching, this time is was clear that something was up! Their parents had not shown any reaction for a moment after seeing his expression slip.

"I'm sorry for wasting your time my fellow nobel ponies, I'll be on my way and wish you a great day, twilight and night." Gold Rush said as he got up to leave.

Cynder jumped and thanks to years if training her limbs in climbing motions then clung to the roof without efforts.
Cynder didn't want him to see her, especially if he managed mind magic or perception altering spells for everyone he meet.

Cynder could see the warm looking smile drop like a anvil on a cartoon character on a moment
he didn't thing to be observed anylonger.
Its magnificent what creatures let drop once thry think themselves unobserved and no longer listen to.

As he got into the hallway his eyes smile fell as well and he glared while walking out the door.
If the door had been sentient it would have been opening itself to spare itself the trouble this slighted nobel pony might do.

Cynder know this won't turn out well without the Alicorns reminder to nobels what happened to their honorary family members if they precived themself threatened.

Cynder waited roughly 5 minutes after Golden Rush had left before she got off the ceiling.
Once she walked into the living room with the mares having a heated debate on having two instead of one stallion in their herd permanently, outside colt clubs for mares to enjoy themself in and the occasion of foal service to keep Equestria population running.

Cynder informed them that she had witnessed the conversation and what they had been missing. When Cynder called out the Black Hoove Agents in the room, was she shocked to see noone there.
This was a very interesting coincidence that Gold Rush had the agent outside observation range, while playing mind tricks on them...

"Until I get news from Cadance, Nightmare,
Luna or Celestia i think anyone should stay here in the house. Seriously, don't - leave - the - house!"
Cynder said in a surprising bone chilling voice to her family.

Her Apple flavored sister and the elder mares asked why Cynders explained facts are telling anything negative against Gold Rush.
Yep, Gold Rush had quite done a number on them.
Only Bright Mac snapped suddenly out of it when his concentration failed and he bleed most magic in his body out in a wave of earthpony magic.

Without Gold Rush magic running through his magical pathways in sufficient quantities did Birgit Macintosh come out if his charm effected mind state. With a nod of understanding dud the apple farming noble nodded to his daughter Cynder in understanding.

This looked like a certain pony in Tarterus would get a room mate soon enough...

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Hope you liked the teaser.
Thanks to harlock5399 and BeastBrony you will have a great chapter.
harlock5399 for the general idea.
Beastbrony for helping me with his Displaced character Six.
Not to forget that dude that keeps writing redicules numbers of horse words:
Nightmare Moon! ... Wait a second...
Black--Soul!

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