Nov
1st
2022
Random reviews · 3:20pm Nov 1st, 2022
"Yeah, Lemon, it kind of is!" Indigo hissed. "What, did you leave an engraved invitation, too?"
This is kind of funny. I like this line.
Sour Sweet placed her hand to her heart. "You wound me," she said, mock-dramatically. "I just want you to know that."
Love the dryness and sarcasm in this version of Sour Sweet. Definitely a fun character to work around with and write about.
"You're crowding the place," Cadance said, her voice carrying easily in the silence. "I think you'd all better come outside."
Way nicer than my high school principal.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/294264/1/better-late-than-never/1-inside-looking-out
