This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Very nice.
Things are heating up now
Author: This is the last chapter of this arc!
Readers: Yay! More arcs to come!
*** 40 chapters later of the same arc (yes, I'm greatly exaggerating) ***
Author: This is the last chapter of this arc!
Readers: ... Riiiiiight.
Joking aside, I'm still enjoying the ride. If it takes more chapters than you thought, I'm happy to get more horse words to read.
Cold War now sufficiently heated to raging war and loving it. Really interested and hooked on the new insights into the ‘thieves’ and dogs, and the traded blows significant as expected. This is bound to escalate further, to what level I’m unsure and I love that about your work; can never make accurate predictions. Will prey come out on top and preserve his facade? Maybe retake caves and sewers and create new lair? Or lose all he holds dear? Maybe the Sun Wolf will take notice and action. Guess it’s gunna be another long couple of weeks until I know.
Oh, woe is us! You're going to write more of this wonderfully amazing ambrosia of a story for us readers to then freely enjoy? Whatever shall we do?!
YAwn
I pulled an all-nighter but Im glad I did, as it's 7:41 in the morning and I got to see the new chapter as soon as I saw it was on the featured list again.
Beautiful chapter as always
Even if the arc never ends, that's fine. I'd read this forever.
This isn't going to end well. I'm not sure how much hope Prey has if he doesn't figure out something, cause I get the feeling that Lemon Pink is going to die soon.
Yikes. Sack head is pretty dangerous. And so are these self righteous assholes that just refuse to leave well enough alone.
As Prey would say, victory isn't what's important, surviving is; and these guys are planning on not doing it as far as I can tell.
I was practically shaking as I read this chapter. The suspense is killing me!
Alright, the final battle (of this arc) is about to begin, so let's see what's at stake here. If Prey loses, he's going straight back to prison. No two ways about it, Prey either eradicates all of the thieves or faces a total defeat. However, even if he avoids a total loss, this could just as easily become a Pyrrhic victory if he loses Lemon or simply draws too much attention to the sewers/caves (if the guards investigate the caves, Prey loses his lair and the veropede by default). Losing the veropede would be a big loss, but not a crippling one, so I predict it's one he'll end up dealing with. If Prey kills off the thieves, doesn't draw too much attention to himself, and keeps Lemon alive, then they'll be left with a base and each other at the bare minimum. But given the powerful artifacts the thieves have at their disposal... perhaps Prey and Lemon will come out on the other side with a greater advantage than they started with. Whatever the case, I'm looking forward to the climactic finale of this arc.
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Yes, this is just the worst, I might just complain, how dare he to give us more of this incredible story.
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Well, yes, but it's specified the thieves wrecked his base.
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Sorry, I was referring to the entirety of the sewers as a potential hideout.
Read The Innocents Abroad (Mark Twain)
There are several chapters about "The Ascent of Mount Vesuvius" before he even gets there & several more after he does.
If it's good enough for Mark Twain......
Since they weren't able to recover the bodies of their comrades this time, I wonder if there were any magical artifacts on the bodies of the ponies and diamond dogs that were killed by either traps or the veropede that Prey could recover and use.
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Ah, it was just diamond dogs who died. The unicorn thieves managed to all get out alive. So no artifacts this time around for Prey. 😞
But hey, that's the difference between being a close rage squishy but strong front line, 🐶 and being a long range magic wielding physics defying spellcaster. 🦄 Life and death. Live or die. Win or lose. Dog or horn horse.
It is, as always, delightful to read your story.
I am filled with anticipation.
War never changes.
Bone rot. Artifacts. Sewers. Jungle. Everything is different, nothing has changed.
Next chapter is going to be the arc finale, huh? To say I'm looking forward to it is an understatement!
Poor Prey, although I'd never really expected him to go back to a compromise site.
There is good in this mess, a hostage and a DD too angry to think, since Prey is in a paranoid episode, he might see that coming.
Maybe a source of intel if he manages to get his hooves on him, I hope everything will be alright.
As usual, good chapter.
Another amazing chapter!! Keep up the amazing work!!
Leaving the mountain entirely thats? thats really breaking his parole! Wonder where he's going. Probably following a lead from the intel... can't wait to see the end of this arc, this is for sure a battle to the death, both sides are too sure of their ways.
do you have a Kofi or something, id love to pitch in a few bucks for all the entertainment
Thanks for the chapter!
Is it bad that I've nearly read the entire story in little over a week?
A bit suspicious that the alpha went through the wickerwatch infested sewers up to where Prey and Lemon were and was apparently not noticed by them.
I'm leaning more towards Prey knowing he was there and preparing accordingly.
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Those are rookie numbers, try three days.
Hmm. The more and more I hear of these Unicorn Theifs, the more I think they may be Solar Guards or some other Solar 'Cultish' Order. Perhaps a Crusader Order of Celestia or something similar, they say b the sun way too often for it to be anything else.
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I'm thinking he was the prisoner they took. Setting up a trap and such
Just when I caught up, you post another chapter! The nerve! Now I get to stay up late tonight, enjoying it! All because of you!
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Man it's gonna be awkwarrrrd when they finally meet
"...YOU! What are you doing in the throne room!?"
Pray: "uh, I work here? For the Princess?"
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And then the Solar Guards that took him from prison walk in and it turns into a three-way glare off, meanwhile Luna, Gloom, and Crimson are all going 'What the fuck is going on'
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Ha! 'Horse words'. Made me laugh overly for something so simple 🤣
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Who will live? Who will die? As they say, there's only one certainty in war, and that is: "Some is going to die." 💀
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I'm going to be honest, I am really looking forward to writing the big, final confrontation to this Arc! It's going to be so much fun to make!
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Thank you for the offer, really, but no thanks. I'm just writing this for entertainment and enjoyment.
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Well, I suppose that depends. How badly where you supposed to be doing something else instead? 😅 (I'm very happy you thought it was worth the read though, thanks)
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"Do you even praise the Sun?!"
Sooo, you think you can break 2.5 mil words before it's all over? So far Savage Skies series holds the record in my fav folder, but hey, it's been 800k and there's so much to tell still
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I suppose 'Lamb Words' would be more appropriate in this case.
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Meh, I can live without a sleep schedule. And I found out about this from KKSlider, and I am very glad I checked this out, cause this is one of my new favorite stories. Anyway I must now check out Savage skies. I only have 50,000 words before I'm current after all.
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So is savage skies a series or a user? Cause I can't find either
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It is a series of stories I believe (if we are talking about the same thing?) 🤔
Here: Savage Skies Stories
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1 million, yes, I have enough left in my head for that easily. 2 million though? Oh jeeze yikes, I mean, maybe? But that's kinda' pushing it. Although I have no idea what the future will bring of course.
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I think it is, thanks. Anyway i should probably get back to editing so I shall start reading Savage Skies later.
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A series I managed to read in ~week. All of it it was time wonderfully spent. Just like I read all 700k of your story once I found it, in one go, hence the comparison. A sizable work of fiction, not like those puny 10k oneshots one that holds your attention throughout hundreds of thousands of words.
Anyway, I hope you can push it to 2mil and not burn out in the process. Take care
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Some similar themes are found in diaries of a madman,
Im eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I cant wait to see how this massive web of lies collapses around prey.
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Diaries of a Madman. 25% read, upvoted, but left in the Realm bookshelf. I don't quite remember, but something must have put me off. It's still good, because already upvoted
Thanks for suggestion, twas appreciated
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if it was the later 75% I could see it, people really were not a fan of the aqua arc. the only thing i can think of around there that would be particularly offputting is the estrus arc. thinking back on it, yeah I can see why people would stop there. its arguably the darkest moment
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Not sure about arcs, it was 25% in, 75% left. Also I'm not a big fan of HiE in general, so there's that. I might get back to it some day