This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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prey will proberly be disappointed how this hunt end ponies dont have the stomach to go for the kill
Oh shit!
You forgot a period at the end
Sometimes I wish I could like a story a second time. This is one of those times.
Absolutely lovely. I can't wait for the confrontation.
You can't blame Gloom for covering all his bases, Prey. Ah well.
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Always love to see more of this, closure is coming in fast and it has very little change to work, especially with soft ponies, but it will also be the time to see if Prey kept his reflexes from his time in the resistance.
Let's just hope he'll cover all the possibilities, such as hostages, not being in the line of fire, or being recognized on the way.
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Thanks for pointing that out, yeah, I forgot a full stop it seems :
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As you said, the conclusion to this event is coming fast (Next chapter actually). Good stuff will happen then, I promise!
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🌞Thanks for saying that.
Is the ISND based on the night watch from Discworld ? I can see a lot of similarities, like magic smelling ozone, Gloom acting like Vimes and Prey feels like a parody of Carrot with the fake innocence sometimes.
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Yeah, it really does. Kick in your door in the middle of the night, and when they leave the building, someone's died.
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Uh, well no, it wasn't supposed to be like that. But if you see it like that and there are similarities, sure, I don't see why not.
Yay! Can't wait for next chapter! Best story!
It took a couple of days but I read everything and I am in LOVE with this story! I can't wait for the next part.
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Well, I'm glad to hear you think it was worth those couple of days to read. Thanks! 😊
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Usually, every other weekend
Chapter?
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😅 I'm flattered that you're keen for another chapter, but I only released one last week, I need about two weeks to make a chapter at current rate. 😂
But there will be one this coming weekend!
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*makes calendar to count down the days*
Ok
Still pretty pleased with the story overall. There are spelling mistakes here and there on all the chapters, but it’s mostly correct from a grammatical/spelling view.
Since I don’t know if it’s worth reviewing every previous chapter, I recommend that you read the chapter you’re working on out loud once right before you post. It’ll stop you skipping right past the little errors that crop up.
Keep up the good work!
S'more edits, bold if not quite as sweet as the usual fireside treat. Well, actually there's only one edit but I already wrote that sentence so we'll just have to pretend.
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Well thanks again for the help, but I don't get the reference to a fireside treat? 😅 What's it mean?
I've never been so emotionally invested in a chase scene, holy shit
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Well, uh, thanks. That's good I think? When writing it, it was definitely a new and stretching style, trying to write 'action' and 'speed' so it doesn't feel stale and slow. Thanks. 😄
Error Report: They're going to go to ground and we'll loose (lose) any chance of following this trail.
The salt dealers couldn't safely pick (pack) there.
it just hit me right now that the quality of the cellar trap door was actually a VERY subtle hint at a lumber yard or similar high level manufacturing. Where else could you get something custom made to be air tight and have in installed in a condemned building presumably off the books. Why didn't i see it sooner.
I mean, in terms of the story, it’s never gonna happen, for many reasons, but hypothetically, couldn’t Prey ‘make’ himself a new body? Or better yet, steal one? I know why he can’t, but would it be possible for him to do so?
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Well, somewhat a spoiler: He does do some research into that, what with all those Changeling corpses, and the unicorn bodies stolen from the city morgue. If it was possible to actually get right, and not badly mangle and end up brain-dead or something, well... He never reached that point in his research