This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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I had a feeling Prey would find away to avoid the trial. No way he would ever risk that cobfrontation.
Doh, whos at the doooooor..........
Oh, Gossamer and Prey becoming closer?
And SMH if that's Celestia or Luna at the door.
I love this story.
Great chapter
It's been a while since we have gotten any art
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"You smart. You very smart."
Yeah, it was kind of a bit obvious ๐
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Um, er, well, you see, the things is, err, kinda'.... haven't done any like I was supposed to for a while? *cringe*
I have great ideas like, "Ohhh, that would be great fun to draw. But then I don't, because drawing takes almost half the time it takes to do a chapter. Because I'm slow at drawing.
I do have some pictures made, but those match to future events in the story, so when we get to those is when they will come out, made from back when I was more dedicated/motivated/skilled/insaner. (Don't want to give any spoilers) ๐ฅ
Always a pleasure to read a new chapter.
Little sheep is becoming a Not so Good Little Sheep... May the sheep find peace with lovable ponies learning friendship and magic
*finishes chapter in less than 10 minutes* oh, come on!!!
I think you missed a word at the end there.
Other then that little detail it was a great chapter.
One of my favorite stories so far. It has been an absolute pleasure to read, hope you continue to update regurarly, as im exited to see where Prey and his escapades takes him next
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Ah yes, thank you for pointing out that mistake. Fixed it now thanks. ๐
This is my favorite chapter now, I could stop laughing when the nurse learned about Preys predicament and started to verbally tear Gloom apart.
Gloom does kinda hold the idiot ball in this chapter. I would chalk this up to Thestrals having culturally different ways of child rearing. Or this maybe a case of ponykinds fanatical loyalty to their Princesses over riding their common sense and common decency. The nurse made good points though from an outsider perspective, Prey sounds like an underfed, sleep deprived, socially isolated child soldier who is being denied a proper education. This sounds unethical, immoral, and definitely illegal (as far as the U.S. is concerned).
Now as the audience we are clues in on whatโs actually going on better then the characters in the story most of the time. I just canโt help but wonder if other Ponies are having the same viewpoint as the Nurses in regards to Preys predicament.
As one adventure ends, another begins.
One of the best things I've ever read, and imagining Prey saying that...
One day the ISND will have a full 8 hours of sleep, one day!
A nice, clean chapter. Except for this one thing. I will note, from here on is where it really starts to feel like the story is hitting it's stride. The stuff happening before was good, the stuff that happens after even moreso. The ISND really starts feeling like a (dys)funtional team rather than a school group project.
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Well, thanks, I'm glad you think it's coming together. It certainly all goes downhill for the ISND's mental well being from here on out.
I think you mean
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Yes, I'm certain that's what I also meant. ๐ Thanks for taking the time to point that out.
"It would be a brave lawyer who tried to defend someone, guilty or not, against the only recently reformed Nightmare Moon." Did you mean Night Watchers here? Ignore if not
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Ah, no, it was referring to Luna, who was presiding over the trial since it was being held in the Night Court.
Error Report: A(t) the moment, it seems they are having issues with someone inside their organi
s(z)ation who keeps making mistakes."but he was in such a good mood it hadn't
teven affect the thestral.There didn't seem (to be) much Gloom could say to that angelic smile,
HAHA! Prey is finding it hard to maintain his awful attitude in the presence of people he is finding he actually cares about
Do you smell that? Friendship?
symbolism? be reborn? Resurrection? interesting
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๐ "By the power of Friendship rainbow cannon lazer, I hereby declare you FIXED!"
'There were' or 'they had'
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I can absolutely see Prey just throwing some random pony in front of him to protect him from the Rainbow Death Laser