This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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At the very least, the pilot was in Summer (The Summer Sun Celebration).
E11 was Winter Wrap Up, the start of Spring.
E13 was Fall Weather Friends
So, either it was 6 months later with only 1 episode between them
(& the first season lasted almost 2 years or longer)
or they were out of sequence.
IMO, a number of other episodes were also out of sequence
Prey is gonna have such a rough time when everything comes to light...
This is a typo, right?
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Hang on a sec nevermind
All the progress of the Night and Royal Guards being more tolerant of each other has been set back...if that traitor is found, I look forward to the humbling the Royal Guard will have. Maybe Canterlot will be humbled too once the Salt Trade is exposed and the murders eventually come to light.
I wonder if Luna will have words for Prey after that near-miss...
I'm always happy to read another chapter about my favorite lamb.
And now he's going deep in investigation, wonderful.
Great job, like always.
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What, you mean when he realizes that her scheming is so straightforward and basic that it makes people question how dumb can she be?
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I'm assuming you mean Celestia, and, were she actually a villainous schemer in this story: it would be the best outcome. Then at least Prey would be vindicated for six decades of horror. Alas, I believe it will not be the case. Luna on the other hand seems to not think through all of her actions, as I suspect is the matter with the hidden magic on the cuffs.
I... want more. When is next chapter?
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Usually, about every 2 weeks
Iām curious if Prey met the main six what would his opinion on each of them be?
I mean beyond them being naive idiots(Pinkie & Rarity), boastful idiots(Rainbow Dash & Applejack), or foolish idiots(Twilight &Fluttershy).
How did you manage to get this story so popular?
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Yep! Up and posted. (It was a bit longer than the last few, took an extra day)
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Don't... really know if I'm being honest? š
I'd like to say it was good writing, skill, dashing good looks, and charm, but really it's probably just time. I have been regularly posting every two weeks for over a year now. So it just kind'a adds up? Maybe?
And compared to a lot of the really really good FiM stories out there, (there are a few of my absolute Fav's in mind), this one isn't that popular really. But thanks. š
Edit in bold.
Don't mess with the sleep deprived ones, they won't feel bad about fucking you up until tomorrow, and even then only barely.
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Heh. That's a pretty accurate observation on the state of the sleep deprived, both in the story and also IRL. And thanks for the editing help again.
Hmmm... Does Gloom know more about Prey than he's letting on? He said something about 'You're still somewhere deep in there'... That seems utterly suspicious to me.
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Sorry for the late comment, but gloom is still seeing Prey as a kid and he's hoping that the innocence was still inside him.
So when he said "it's still there" he was talking about Prey not being scarred by anything and having his innocence taken away.
which of the five rivers of Hades, Prey?
<3 oh, dude, Gloom is my favorite character <3
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What about Gloom's dream?
What did he dream?
Or there's always the possibility he was promoted due to nepotism because he's boinking an alicorn.
Something I find interesting about Prey is, he still decides to go by Prey. No one really knew his name, he could have foregone it completely and made a new name for himself, but instead he kept the one forced onto it. I also half expected to come up with a fake female name, and start pretending to be a girl since he would know no one gets unconditionally trusted as much as a female child. I think it's unique that, despite everything, he still keeps some remnant of his identity despite numerous chances to completely reinvent himself for at least deception purposes.