This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
Page generated in 0.04 seconds
Total duration
895 users online
288,647 hits today, 2,673,812 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
well damn, that was quick. going to read this later.
it be interesting to see how this case connects with wider going on, on another note i be interested in prey reaction to other modern day things like the alarm clock
I think you mean
Other then that this was a great chapter.
9374129
Ah yes, you are quite right.
Thank you very much for pointing out that mistake.
Regards
9373803
Yes. Backwater village over the mountains + Fifty seven years in prison has kept Prey out of the loop. Hope to keep up slipping in surprises, keeps things interesting. Like Luna's return. Who (in the context of the characters in the MLP universe) was expecting that?
Some surprises we already know, others....not so predictable. (I hope!)
9373767
Ha ha, yeah, usually it is a chapter every two weeks or so. (Then again, I am only 14 chapters in, so who knows if I can keep that up? Here's to hoping)
This is a great story so far i look forward to Future updates.
Have been reading for the past 7 Hours and I must say I adore this story
Am exited to see where the little lamps scemes will take her and if she will ever make herself some Bone Rot to carry around in flasks, just in case.
9393458
Well in that case you are in luck. There will be another chapter end of this week. (Needs editing first)
Also, as always for any writer (delusional scribbler) I am glad you like.
9394045
Hello 😄 It is great that you find this story 'approved'. Thank you.
Will he carry around Bone Rot? Long story ahead, we'lll have to wait and see.
(I also assume that you mean 'lamb', not 'lamp'. Our main Character is bright, but not quite that bright)
🎇
9394563
nah. i'm pretty sure Prey is just a conveniently shaped lamp.
I'm really hoping that Prey comes to at least like his two companions a little bit, Prey is understandably a bit of a dick but it would be nice if he ended up at least semi-liking someone in the story.
A few errors and typos have starting to creep in the last few chapters, might as well make the effort to point them out as I find them if the author remains about.
Shadows outside your window, draws (drawers) searched, the garden disturbed, anything like that?" He asked.
As I'm re-reading, I've noticed a number of spacing errors in the early chapters up to and including this one, and possibly ones after this (I've also noticed it in the story description). For example:
When convenient, I'd recommend going back over your earlier chapters and fixing the errors so that it will be easier to read for OCD formatting freaks like me. I'll be sure to leave another comment on the chapter where the spacing errors cease to be a frequent problem so you don't wind up reading through everything again.
10921405
I have gone and changed that one now, thanks. It is a bit of an issue with FiMfiction write, as the space where you write the chapter is different to the size of the page which you, the reader, can read. It means sometimes there isn't a noticeable gap and I skim over it. But if you do see them, please do let me know. 🙃
i love your sense of humor <3.
10992055
I do try to write to some comedic effect. I am not very good at it, and am trying to improve with comedy.
The word you should have here is propriety (ie. etiquette or decorum), not proprietary (relating to an owner or ownership).
11061656
Okay, thank you for pointing that out for me. Fixed now. 😁