This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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This story is great I love prey as a protagonist
Celestia definitely just played favorites. Even if fluttershy was only trying to help, she got little to no punishment for stealing an incredibly dangerous and rare pet that belonged to the princess.
And the guard got fired? Fair, admittedly, but I feel like Celestia just lets the element bearers get away with murder sometimes.
So. We are getting realy close to the grand galloping gala (4 episodes).
I have a feeling that (at least part of) the reason you mentioned the whole phenix thing was to hint that.
So i wonder, just what will go wrong?
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While it is true that equestria is dark and that ponies are naive and blind to what's going on under the surface like Wilbur. It is also known that Prey is paranoid and assumes the worst and it can easily result in him poisoning his own perspective and interpretation of things with incorrect assumptions. So just how much of what prey believes is “going on under the current” is true?
You mention that it's odd how Charlotte’s Web is a children's book despite the dark undertones. But there are many children stories that are seen as equally dark, or even darker. But just how much of it was intended by the author and how much was created by the readers? That question sparks the idea of “Death Of the Author”, which states that that you cannot (and should not try to) understand the intentions of the author by reading the story.
That is also the case with Prey and his world view. He cannot truly understand the nature of everypony based on their actions and on his experience, he can guess, but he might not be entirely correct. The biggest example is Celestia, while he can try and guess the reasoning for her actions, those guesses will be influenced by his experience and worldview, and thus may not reflect Celestia's true intentions.
I personally think the question of how dark this fic’s universe is (is Prey perspective close to the truth not?), boils down to this:
Is celestia (at least somewhat) malevolent like how Prey sees her, or is she just ignorant?
Always a pleasure tu read a new chapter of this story.
I loved the little detail at the end, so far every character is faithful to the show, so it can go in every possible way.
I just hope Prey will have his happy ending, the little fella deserves it.
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There are two very opposite views going on, and Prey expects the worst. But is he right? Or is he wrong? Neither? Both? The way I see it, it's a sliding scale with two extremes.
Extreme #1. 💀 Prey <------------ Middle 😑 Ground ----------> Ponies 😇 #2. Extreme
Where does reality actually rest on this scale though? Would Prey believe the answer if it was the ponies who was right or would he think them liars? Or if it's the reverse, would they think him the liar?
I guess we're gonna' find out!
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Thank you, glad you like the story. And Prey.
Mainly just responded to say I love your avatar Icon. "Life is Pain "
Ha!
Is Prey becoming a Fluffy Doll of Evil?
Soon or later Prey will know that Celestia isn't that very smart... Like she felt smart in the first 3-4 seasons but then started to become more... Dumber or Comdy now in the later seasons?
Though I'm surprise that no pony on that prison Island hasn't come by to ask where is Prey?
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How do you know that the prison guards aren't searching for him even now? Slowly closing in, sometimes stopping for tea and cakes, but getting closer and closer everyday until...
I like your comment about Fluffy Doll of Evil. Seems appropriate.
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How do I know? I didn't say I know, I just question why hasn't any guard come by to ask where that little fluff of evil went...
Discord...? Or did that already happen? Is he gonna meet the mane six? Will he try to kill them?
What’s with the creepy pie face
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🍋 To answer your question; No, Discord has not come about in the time line yet. What's just happened was the Bird in the Hoof episode.
As to whether the Mane 6 will meet Prey?.... Well, only time will tell! (Inset creepy Pie face here: )
Another question, will he meet princess cadance? Or spike? Those two seem very likely
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Well, Spike is usually with the Mane 6, so if he meets them (if), then Prey would almost certainly meet Spike too.
As to Cadance, the Royal Wedding is a little ways off just yet. (And there's the changeling invasion too) Sooo....Maybe? But not yet for her.
I would ask, why those two in particular do you pick out? 🍎
Well, they are the type of characters that only show or do big important things on episodes that are based around them. Spike is just comic relief sometimes, and it would be nice to see him get some importance.
Sheesh, considering how it seemed like Celestia brought her Phoenix solely to troll Fluttershy, those Royal Guards really didn't deserve to get sacked. Then again, they failed in their duty...if it hadn't been Fluttershy who stole Philomena, that would have been bad.
On another note, that means Prey was conscripted moderately close to the Grand Galloping Gala. I imagine he will not be amused once he learns of such a "party," and even less so if he's forced to help guard it, but will enjoy hearing of/witnessing the chaos the Bearers cause. More importantly though, Discord will be freed soonish!
I just realized... the Night Guard is like a fucking swat team while the Royal Guard is the police.
Except with a lot of racism.
But the Night Guard would make a powerful Ally
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Yeah you didn't need the qualifier that's just the police
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Eh, if you believe that, sure. I still say the problem is just incompetent/untrained/underfunded police and not racist police. Just people not confident in what they are doing and so jump to 100 real fast. To many fat guys/ tiny women that can't fight wearing the uniform.
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🤣 😂 😆 SmugAnimeGirlsLaughing.webm
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Except when you have cops who come forward and say that it's standard practice when you shoot an unarmed black man to plant drugs on his body.
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One possibility does not exclude the other possibility, likely some combination of both
i've loved your words <3
"Art is a kind of innate drive that seizes a human being and makes him its instrument. The artist is not a person endowed with free will who seeks his own ends, but one who allows art to realize its purpose through him." - Carl Gustav Jung
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When has that ever happened? Source please?
Heh, so Fluttershy tanked 5 lives with her stunt. Wonder how many other lives the Mane 6 screwed over behind the scenes?
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Oh, thank you. Good catch. 😄
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