This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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oh shit!
Holy heck.
Urgh, too much tension in this chapter, it feels even better when reading it at night.
So, we'll finally see Prey in a combat situation, this will be interesting.
Oh daym,...
Tensions are high, Gloom getting aggressive. Prey opening up (under pressure).
And now faced with a choice. Keep quiet and secretive and be definetly murdered by a ruthless drug cartel.
Or, bring out blood runes, mind fuckery and actual murder and only maybe be executed by Luna.
Dunno what will happen, but I presume shit will go down.... And I thought waiting for this chapter was hard.
At least they got locked in a room filled with weapons. Silver lining and all that.
Dammit! The author is succumbing to the need to use emojis! Abandon ship!
I feel like a complete derp for not thinking of this before now, but...
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It will take a whole lot more for me to abandon this ride.
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? Always done that...
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Thanks 😁
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Quick! Pretend I didn't say anything!
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Damn, this kept me on the edge, can't wait for more
I absolutely love this story.
Mean not man but it’s an amazing story just wanting to point that out
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Hey, thanks a lot for pointing out the mistake. Fixed in now thanks!
Ah yes the allot, cousin to the alot.
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Fixed now thanks.
Probably the dumbest thing said all chapter. I can't count the number of times illusions and or silence has made the difference in my group's Pathfinder games. Heck one of my favorite tactics is to use Silent Image, a basic illusion spell, as a makeshift mass invisibility to hide the party to set up ambushes, usually by making a wall appear in front of us.
Not to mention how deadly a sneaking rogue with a knife and an invisibility spell can be...
Awww Prey cares about him <3
I know!!!, but when? >:c
Alright, perhaps not quite wishing all the way to death, but if Gloom got his throat clawed open and lost his voice completely this time, Prey would be satisfied.
Love that line. It's a possible indication that there is progress for Prey, as little as it is. It's a slow burn, but you'd expect that and it's well done.
This whole raid was a dumpster fire though. Gloom and Crimson are hyperfocusing and, yeah, making mistakes. In addition to everything Prey points out, they are also sleep deprived, exhausted and starving. Really should have waited for backup.
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Thank you for all the corrections you've been pointing out along the way. And yes, they rushed in, let their emotions guide them, and generally made a hash up of it.
What about prey sensing thoughts how did that unicorn slip through