This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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I will enjoy reading this!
I wonder what discord will do to them?
... wow he cursed Himself good ...
And yup, he is Unintentionally being reformed
Wew, it had to go down right at this time, almost like a cosmic joke, but in the end I got my chapter.
What a good chapter it is, make me hate the annoying 6 even more, Discord is next, right when they're supposed to rest, are you really that cruel ? Poor little guy.
I'm also happy at Prey's condition, he isn't some kind of anime hero, he has now a handicap, that's nice, evolution and all that jazz, it's not really surprising considering he already mentionned losing some due to the powder.
It's great, as usual, thanks for the good chapter, as always.
I am looking forward to Prey meeting both Luna and Saffron Swirl again.
Jesus the wait for these chapters is like torture, every time I see an update I hope and hope itโs this story, only to be crushed when it isnโt! The sweet sweet release of a chapter is one to be cherished, then mourned when consumed so quickly.
... oh jeez, Prey with a ribbon and glasses? He's gonna be an adorable bundle of murderous antipathy. And it will be magnificent.
Given how this chapter started though, I can't help but wonder if Luna is going to try and and "reward" the ISND with tickets to the next GGG. Because that's clearly what they need.
And the moment of bonding between Crimson and Prey was so nice, it's a shame that Crimson prolly still thinks Prey is low-key racist.
Oh sure, his heart will keep beating, but he'll be a vegetable in a couple of centuries. There's no torture like slowly becoming a fucking prune
Geez the fact prey has a set of small bear traps on his heart is horrifying
Looking good. Arc 4! Thanks for the chapter!
The scene without words between between Pray and Crimson makes me think something has change with how pray' s mind magic interacts with crimson. The funny part is that it seems to go both ways and on a more subconscious level. It would be fun if this is used in a more direct way in a tense moment of the story.
be interesting to see who filed that false report about the reinforcement because they can be charged with the deaths of all the ponies who died to the warlock
The closure of this arc has so many little tidbits, I can't wait to see what happens.
You think Prey is having a hard time NOW? Wait until they tell him he has Opioid Induced Constipation & needs an enema.
"You can just shove that idea UP YOUR ASS!"
"No, the way it works is: We shove it up your ass"
Prey is an amazing character
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I wonder if glasses could even help Prey. Conditions that can be treated with glasses usually involve just the light not being focused correctly at either the cornea or lens for a variety of potential reasons, but in this case, the poison likely damaged the tissue of the cornea itself, perhaps it could've even damaged his nerves if it was also neurotoxic. So it's quite possible there's nothing the doctors will be able to do to fix or treat his vision depending on how advanced equestrian medicine may be. But they could also just have it magic-ed away in the next chapter by a unicorn for all we know, guess we'll have to wait and see.
I did wonder if Prey was going to see an optometrist at some point. Nice to get some more lore, a welcome gift to us readers now that the site is back up.
Please continue the good work!
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Maybe, but it may have just burned away the surface of his corneas in a way that effects the focusing of his vision even after they heal. Some nerve disorders can also be remedied with special glasses: my dad's eyes for example cannot focus in tandem due to a stroke he suffered, but prism glasses allow him to see normally.
In any case, Prey would eventually get fed up enough to somehow carve runes onto his eyes.
Thank you for the chapter, i love this story!
I better get to see Prey with those new spectacles. Oh, and Brotherhood is magic. aah aah aah ah aaah ah ah ah ah aaaaah ah aaaaaaaaaa
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Prey's getting reformed by the power of Friendship! *Cough cough* Well, for a given definition of "reformed". ๐
As in, you're his friend? Great! You're as safe as houses! You're not his friend? Welp, he wouldn't give you the time of day if you were bleeding to death in the middle of the street as he walked passed. Especially if you tried to grab onto his leg and beg for help. Then he'd probably finish the job because you dared to touch him. ๐
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I'm not going to outright spoil it, and I'm not saying this is what the reason will be, but: Shimmer was disguised as a Border Guard. He was secretly a mimic. (Changeling) Someone in the Border Guard said they sent reinforcements. No reinforcements came. Just something to think about.
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Prey: "I can smile, and murder while I smile."
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I'm just asking, but why 'Saffron Swirl' in particular? ๐
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Horrifying, but probably also not that surprising. It's Prey. ๐
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Yes, the site crash was rather unfortunately timed, even if I do say so myself.
And also yes, the bad guy beats you down in real life? Well, you stay beaten down. No sudden burst of rage power and sudden understanding, you just lose. And that's it. (Discord is still probably half a year away, but maybe less.)
Or [at least i]more โ> uhhhh?
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oh i knew that but i figured some one at the other end got message but being royal guard wanted to interfere, well that going to be interesting how the next arc goes then
Ah, I thought Preyโs goose was cooked for sure there.
I like how this installation was more... relaxed? Than the others. Apologies for the short comment, but family business is currently overhauling the house.
Regards, Laika.
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I feel your pain, brother.
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Gaah! Fimfiction and it's use of italics. It doesn't do it like a normal Word document would, it puts in [ i ] before and [ i/] after the word you want affected. If you put in one wrong space afterwards, it can mess it up. Thank you for pointing it out for me anyways. ๐
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I feel that the character wouldnt be introduced she wasnt going to set in motion prey being forced to reevaluate his all unicorns are evil murder machines outlook. I look forward to that inner debate he is going to have that I hope she starts.
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Hey, itโs slow
Well that was in interesting chapter.
And it was really interesting to learn about how prey got his curse.
So I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what he does with his newly found temporary freedom from the guard.
Have a great day :-)
Such a great story! Loved this chapter, though for some reason I couldn't shake the thought of prey getting into a massive multichapter screaming match with celestia and telling his life story only for her to look at him like "what the fuck are you talking about". Then we find out the border guard went rogue at some point or something. Weird thought and I doubt it's the way the story will go with preys character acting they way he does. That situation would likely never come about except as like a last resort, though it would be quite a sight.
I know loads of people have said this before but I have to say this:
This is the best story I've ever read. Literally nothing compares whether it be on FiMfiction or anywhere else. I've become completely engrossed with this story that I just read all the chapters nonstop. The characters, the world building and the arcs are so well done and have made me feel so many different emotions in a way no other story has done before. I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
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As you say, that exact scene is unlikely to happen, (not least for the fact Prey is terrified of the Sun Wolf and wants to avoid her at all costs), but it is a amusing/vindicating scene to imagine, or the sort of non-canon idea to write a one-off chapter story to. ๐
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Thanks a lot for saying so, I do try to make the story as best I can since that's the whole point and I enjoy writing it.
And I know I've also said it before in other places, but I try to take the best inspiration from everything else other people have written: Character motivation, theme, use of background, individual traits, I try my best to correctly emulate those effects from those other great stories! I don't always get it right but I like to think I get some of it.
So thanks again for the compliment.
Knew the scars were coming. Have been waiting for this eagerly. Sadly for now it was brushed off. Oh well, maybe next time.
I think I wet myself looking at the veropede that's just too damn scary to me.
Anywho love the story keep up the great work!
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Prey's latest in a long line of OP deadly weapons. ๐
I fell in love with this story from the first chapter. Each arc starts out with a slow burn that culminates in either an existential crisis or cosmic horror. I wonder how long before the princesses and Prey's teammates learns of his history?
about Prey's scars :
"That's good... It's still in there. Deep, deep down there. Even if you yourself don't realise it." - Gloom ( Chapter 30.2)
GLOOM:
NOoooo!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate/love to become fond of the characters, i'm weak!!!
Friendship is dark magic bonding
Peace is a lie
There is only passion
Through passion I gain strength
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"Do or do not, there is no try."
*Prey stabs the prisoner*
"Oh my Celestia! Why would you do that?"
"Because you said do it. Duh."