This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Huh, I didn’t think this was going to have Luna now. So far I thought this took place long before but cool.
Anywho, I have to wonder did Celestia really put him in that Volcano or just the ponies doing it without her knowing.
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Well, in the MLP universe, Luna was basically forgotten by the time of her return, so her returning out of the blue kinda' fits. I hope. (that's my excuse and not just lazy writing) 😄
As for fifty seven years in Dreverton and how it happened? That's part of the story. Prey hate's Celestia, but does she even know Prey exists?
Gloom so far has left a good impression.
This story is like watching a burning wreck, that is the sheeps life, it's so depressing, but i can't get enough of it. Gawd damn it.
Or like watching a huge, rusted war time explosive just waiting to explode from being abused by morons.
Good stuff.
I was really hoping that Prey would get free and start avenging himself upon the pony race, not get a SIXTH kind of imprisonment. Slave to resistance, Dreverton, solar guard servant, regular jail, lead coffin, now THIS SHIT?! There needs to be a STRONG payoff to all of Prey's suffering in this story that is clearly a revenge-fic.
And also Gloom has kind of derpy eyes, kind of like Night Watcher. They are intentionally drawn to have more side-facing eyes like actual horses, aren't they?
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i didnt actually get revenge off this.
I'm sure thats what he WANTS but i feel like this is an "eventual rehab" fic.
Ngl tho, this LONG string of nothing happening is frustrating the shit out of me
I really hope this is a REALLY slow burn. It seems like that kind of story and its well written enough to work.
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Weeeeeell, I may be the author and a bit biased, but I personally think it is very slow burn, (it is on chapter 73 now, and there's still loads left to happen), with gradual world building and gradual decent into secrets and mystery. But I may just be biased. 😅
jajaja xd, poor Prey
I know this is ancient history, but it should be 'Your' not 'You're'.
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That is fine, if you are reading again and spot mistakes I can correct, I still appreciate it thanks.
Sergeant. There’s a ton more instances of this I’m not going to mention, but it’s consistently spelled incorrectly.
IIRC that’s intentional
I love how almost every picture is nothing near to what I imagined! Amazing story! Best book!