Syera (Pronounced Sierra) is one of the last Saiyan warriors of Planet Vegeta.
Sent to Equestria as an Infant, her mission wasn't to conquer the planet, but instead live on and carry on her legacy of her fallen race. On the road of friendship, scum, villainy as well as hard choices to make.
With Twilight Sparkle and friends by her side, there's no telling how far they will go further and beyond with their friendship.
(An AU of the Friendship is Magic Timeline mixed with some Dragonball elements and characters most likely.)
Chapters (31)
Interesting start. Definitely going to follow this to see where this young Saiyan's misadventures take her
Welcome to the DBZ/MLP Community, as a fellow DBZ Writer I wish you great luck in the progression of your story! I've taken the liberty of adding your story to Equestrian Saiyans Group.
The planet's name isn't Equestria. its a country, not a planet.
6993034 I know what it is. Im just voicing my version since Equestria is the only mentioned name on their world. So that's why I named their planet Equestria
6992662 Thank you, I appreciate it.
6992662 Thank you, I appreciate it.
7015865 you could of came up with your own name then change it when a comfirmed name of the planet comes out.
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Though, it's slightly conflicting on our Story names. Considering my main story is called Saiyan of Equestria. And yours has that in your title.
7016216 Oh, sorry I did not know, any suggestions on what else I could call it? because I thought hard with this name since I added my character's name into the beginning of the title
Syera: Saiyan Tale in Equestria
Syera: A Tail of Equestria
Syera's Equestria
Or simple
Syera of Equestria
Just some suggestion, the reason is that "Saiyan of Equestria" is one of the leading DBZ Crossover fictions of Fimfiction. And I don't want this story being overshadowed because of my own. I want it to be a successful tale of its own.
7027566 I like em. and I guess I might use one of them or come up with something
7027566 But still when you think about, there are a lot of DBZ/MLP crossovers that may have the same or similar name but their story is different. and not just on here, fanficton.net and many other places
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I just don't want exact naming. So far there are none on FanFiction or Fimfiction (outside your own). Of course there are similar ones (like the ones I suggested to you) but that's to be expected.
7027620 Anyway, I changed the name. what do you think?
more chapters for me to read please
please add more chapters I love this story
7020531 next few chapters please I want this story to continue and have a sequel to this story and have it follow the My Little Pony Friendship is magic seasons 1 through 5 and have syera reach all the to super saiyan god/goddess saiyan please
7027624 I think it's a great and beautiful name please update more chapters please
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It's good :D
7029038 I'll do my best, I may have it follow that far indeed from Season 1 through 5, maybe even 6 when it airs of course. and I don't know if she'll be Super Saiyan God but the most I might consider her in transformation wise is maximum Super Saiyan 3. But I'll have to think about it really.
7031026 ok please do ur best I believe in u and please keep me updated on this story ok
more please
Time to reveal my giant monkey.......
"GASP"
...........form!
Phew.....(thank god I thought he meant penis)
keep updating this story my friend and message me on the other chapters if u can if not I can wait patiently ok
Two problem here, Saiyans have black hair, Vegeta even stated the state of a saiyans hair. And she should have been bad mannered and unruly when she was found, it wasn't until a head injury to Goku that made him the kind hearted saiyans we know now.
7158424 yep
7148988 Yes I understand, but I was thinking along the lines of how Equestria works, maybe the areas Aura of Magic maybe made Syera calmer and less agressive. and She does have Black hair dude. I didn't say it was any other color except gold when she turns Super Saiyan.
7210003 more chapters please
When you say to que the music, spears of determination starts playing in my mind
finaly the story is updated please try to update the story a bit faster my friend but I really love this story
love it
Good story, just one suggestion change Syeras element from pride to honor, because pride is not a positive trait in most cases. One of the seven deadly sins, pride before fall all that stuff. pride makes you selfish because you only care about yourself, The reason Vegeta made so many mistakes was because of his pride, his pride made him incapable of accepting that Gooku is stronger and a better fighter then him and he made big mistakes because of it, like the fact that he had to go solo against all the big bad enemies so he wouldn't look week. His pride made him incapable of working with others.
duh-fu
HOW DOES CELESTIA KNOW ABOUT SAIYAN.
7360519 I see, I understand what you mean, but I suppose Honor is what I mean't to say when I was writing it. another adjustment I can make. thanks for pointing that out
7397784 Think about it, Celestia has been around for who knows how long, I'm sure she knows a lot about the affairs of galactical activities, so maybe there are forces of people maybe keeping Equestria out of Frieza's Sight. kinda like how Goku was when he was sent to Earth as a child, kinda vice-versa.
I always thought that with any HiE like this where it starts from the beginning the human would do...more to change the script of the canon story it just seems like Syera's just along for the ride
7463558 There will be twists and such, it won't follow the story by canon all the way. you'll see
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But they haven't mentioned the color of her hair just that it was dark. Also if they are all unruly at this early stage how do you explain broly who just whimpered while goku thrashed about? Maybe she gets worse later. Subliminal messaging telling a kid to destroy... Yeah while that could work the problem is that the child doesn't understand the meaning of the words in that state. I think goku's unruly state was just him being him. He wouldn't have understood the meaning of the subliminal message until he started under standing words on at least a base level. I.e 6 months to a year. Now without any visual aid the child wouldn't even understand the meaning until they at least heard the word and saw it being used. Also there is what's known as extinction in terms of psychology that refers to when a trained behaviour is learned but when no reaction is given upon behaviour based either negative or positive then the trained behaviour is forgotten.
7617443 All i can say to you is, have you watched Dragon Ball Z from the beginning?
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Just a shot in the dark they are in the same universe so some past meeting is possible.
1why sudden shift to first person
2if she was raised by ponies then she shouldn't know what hell is.
3far too soon for ss, should have at least waited till they were at the castle for that.
4the town really shouldn't have accepted her so easily, basing this off of zecora. I'd imagine many should have been more nervous than anything. Excluding rainbow who has a history of befriending other races.
5why didn't fluttershy react to the "I'm from another planet" bit
6if rarity freaked over twilight's mane Then why was she unresponsive to the (if pictures right) troll doll hair do.
7why didn't turn into a monkey when she looked at the moon is she still has her tail. (I'm willing to let this go if celestia tought her control, must be brought up later if she did.)
8how the he'll do the hell would rarity know about goku. Celestia ill accepted for prophetic dreams and such. But I strongly doubt shed make that knowledge public.
This feels rushed and well blah. Put some more introspection in there make the reactions a bit more natural (Actual advice). Over all I like the concept could use some tweaks to make it flow better.
Was the 7th element really necessary you could have gone without it honestly and made her twilight's guard or something. Also honor doesn't have much to go with friendship but neither does laughter or magic so it could be sarcasm and still make some semblance of sense in the right context.
7617805 I only used shifting to first person when there was something critical happening, like how Twilight witnessed Syera becoming Super Saiyan. Also I chose this point for her to become one since its Nightmare Moon, and Celestia happens to be close to Syera like another mother and Teacher like Twilight is, so it makes sense for her to get super mad at Nightmare Moon to the point where Super Saiyan is possible. also I don't plan on introducing any new transformations till like Discord or Queen Crysalis.
7617805 Also, the town is more accepting of her since she was sent by Princess Celestia along with Twilight and since Pinkie threw that party, she talked with alot of the other ponies. and the thing with Rarity, I just threw that one in there to her knowledge of myths and such. I mean like more HIE stories I've read personally seem to think Humans are a myth, so why not a creature that is Ape-Human like. And trust me when I say this, Rarity will mess with her hair a bit once the GGG or that fashion show where the Six showcase their dresses to Hoity Toity (Assuming I follow that plot, I may or may not.) but definitely the Grand Galloping Gala her hair will be done by Rarity. And the thing with Fluttershy, She does look different and resembles a Monkey so, why not let her be interested. And I thought about this story a lot and Im still thinking of it now for future reference so it doesnt turn into a shit storm lol and I'll go more into depth with Syera's Training and what Celestia taught her.
about time this story chapter was uploaded awesome chapter my friend can't wait for more chapters uploaded keep me posted on the story and others uv written
7679975 Yeah I know, the wait was worth it. but if you see my blogs I'll keep everyone up to date on the next chapter.
7683179 ok I'll b waiting my friend
yes the shrek reference
I love this chapter a lot can't wait for more uploads of this story I'll b waiting my friend
Getting annoyed about syera knowing abilities she shouldn't. 1st instant transmission was taught to goku by another alien race on yardrak I think or was that just tfs? Whatever he learned from another race his way back from namek not something celestia should know about. 2nd kaioken now this one I'm ok to play with if and only if celestia learned it from king Kai and that info is presented later. 3rd I know inconsistency is practically the dbz formula but in base form goku vegeta heck even nappa could lift and break mountains with their fists. Syera should have no problem lifting an ursa minor as a ssj.
Its a pet peeve of mine when crossovers practically ignore the source material. I once read a "crossover" where the author said "hey this is Edward Elric from fma but doesn't have same back story, alchemy or personality." no this is not assumption on my part he freely admitted to just using the name and body of the character but nothing else.
Now that's an extreme case your story is by far way better and sticks closer to the source. But please if celestia is teaching her these techniques please give a reason she knows them in the first place. And I'm not as butt hurt about the power scale because like I said inconsistency is practically the formula for dbz.