Story Review: Anthropology · 4:36pm Nov 17th, 2012
Description (from story page):
Humans.
Truth or myth? Ancient lost civilization or just an old pony's tale?
Description (from story page):
Humans.
Truth or myth? Ancient lost civilization or just an old pony's tale?
No really, I am. The rewrite is going more slowly than I expected due to some unforeseen shit that I have to deal with IRL.
I'm tempted to open the Google Doc up for public viewing just to prove that I'm actually working on it... but that'd open up a whole other can o' worms, I'm sure.
Over the past month, I've done a lot of research on how to make a story plot airtight. My pre-readers have given me lots of great tips and things to avoid (and mistakes I've made), and I've been exchanging e-mails with a friend of mine from university who's actually a published author herself. Lately, our e-mails have centred around that ever-elusive "airtight plot." Her latest e-mail included something that struck me as so obvious that I completely overlooked it.
Even with this revised (and far more in-depth) system of plot planning, it appears that I still suck at plotting a novel. Absent is so full of plot holes and universe-destroying discontinuities that it kills the whole point of the story.
The problem is that I've never written fiction before. I'm a scientist who writes lab reports and research proposals. Turns out that physics + mathematics ≠ creative writing.
I'll just cross 'em off as I get 'em done.
One-sentence story summary. Finished: 17 Jun 2012.One-paragraph story summary. Finished: 17 Jun 2012.Character sheets: Finished: 21 Jun 2012.Twilight Sparkle (main protagonist) Finished: 18 Jun 2012.Nyx (protagonist) Finished: 19 Jun 2012.
I like transparency. I like to have access to all possible information at all times so that I can make an informed decision whenever needed. I also assume that you like the same kind of transparency. Given this, I'm going to make the re-planning and rewrite of Absent as transparent as I can without actually spoiling anything. So, like, 20 per cent opaque.
I do this for two reasons:
Things here keep getting better and better. I was hired into my job to replace a woman who went on maternity leave. When I accepted the job, I was told that it would turn into a permanent position doing something else when she came back.
She came back today.
I'm now unemployed... again.
So much for it turning into a "permanent position."