It's been several weeks since the last chapter, and I figured I should give an explanation. Sure, three weeks without a new chapter would actually be considered normal for some stories on this site, but it's a major slowdown compared to the rate of the previous chapters. Well, first, chapters are probably going to be posted less frequently than before for a simple reason: I started up with a bit of a buffer, and I've sort of burned through it. So you actually have to wait for me to write the

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Commentary for Mare Do Well vs. The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 7000. Don’t read this if you haven’t read the chapter first!

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So this is the commentary for A Hearth’s Warming Eve Carol.

I think this marks the first time I legitimately just threw out everything about the original story. Sure, “Griffon the Prank-Off” didn’t have much to do with the original, but it at least still had the idea of Gilda pulling pranks on people. This one, though, just dispensed entirely with the original idea.

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Commentary on Chapters 13 and 14. Be sure to only read this after reading the chapters themselves!

Lesson 0

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Time for commentary on Chapter 12, The Return of Irony! As always, only read this after reading the chapter, because jokes will be spoiled!

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More commentary! Remember, be sure to read these only after reading the actual chapters because I spoil a lot!

Time for Chapter 10, “Sonic Rain-Dust.”

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As always, be sure to read the chapters before reading these!

Chapter 8 was originally entitled “Culling the Cutie” but I felt that made it sound too violent and I used “Fall of the Cutie” instead.

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Next up are chapters 6 and 7. We start with chapter 6, Dragon Shy. Once again, please don’t read this until you’ve already read the applicable chapters!

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Don’t read this blogpost unless you’ve already read the applicable chapter(s)! I spoil a lot of jokes in this.

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I’ve decided to combine commentary for chapter 2 and 3 into one, mostly because I realized how little I had to say about chapter 3. Not that I disliked chapter 3; it's just a chapter that speaks for itself fairly well.

Chapter 2 can be found here. Again, don’t read the rest of this if you haven’t already read the chapters, because I spoil a whole lot of jokes!

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