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Mar

16th

2013

Review: On the Line · 10:26pm Mar 16th, 2013

This is a review of the first four chapters of On the Line by TheBigBob. The review was originally written as a series of comments/private messages on March 8th, 2013, but I'm republishing it as a blog entry so that people can look at it all at once.

The Review

Chapter 2 style and description advice

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