More build up and subplots, hopefully most of which I can resolve reasonably. The meat of chapter 10 is complete, but I am holding publishing until I work out a weird narrative issue. There is some transitional material insufficient for its own chapter that I have to decide to include at the end of this chapter or push into the beginning of the next chapter.
Internet has been in and out. So has money. Makes writing a bit rough. Have a snippet to make up for it.
“Your combat record is extraordinary. Multiple stars of all shades. Purple Heart with multiple pips. And of course the piece de resistance, the Sovereign Order of Celestia Invictus. Do the others know about this?”
Chapter 8 published without fanfare.
Some of you may also be aware that the chapter names have changed, as well as the numbering. This is because of a fundamental restructuring of the outlines I originally wrote for the second 2/3 of act II and all of act III. The story itself is not in jeopardy; the cuts I made in fact streamline the plot and make the meat of the story more substantial with far more opportunity for developing the core characters. Trust me, it'll be good.
At long last, the first part of Act II has arrived. It's been crazy IRL since I'm packing for a move and trying to plan a wedding, but somehow this came together. I cannot promise regular updates, but I can promise that it's being worked on as I go along.
Act II will dive into the meat of the main story and the real reason war has erupted in the north. I look forward to providing good reading in the future!
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