Flutterheart Explanation · 3:59am Apr 24th, 2012
Recently heard some of the more negative comments about Flutterheart around the web. Let's read them off and explain them:
"Don’t even mention Flutterheart. I started reading it, and while it was quite competent, it got very whiny and patronising very quickly, the self-insert is not very believable, the plot could use a lot of tweaking (is it even worth to to tweak a self insert story?) and it just turns into some kind of weird fullfilment fic."