So sorry that this chapter is slightly shorter. I'm trying to keep up with it and working on a new story that will be posted when its ready.

Sorry for the long wait, so chapter 5 is now live. And don't worry in the next chapter our "little one" finally gets a name. Also thank you all for reading, watching and adding my story to your favorites list!

I have published chapter 4, it is lightly edited but I did not want to keep you all waiting. Still working on 5 but this upcoming chapter should slow things down in the story and start making things seem more clear to the reader.

It appears I need a new one. Anypony willing to read current and future chapters and give me criticism, please message me as soon as possible. Chapter four is up on the site but not published yet because it needs to be checked.

Look for it in Chapter 2, again by Voodoo.

When I get to chapter 5 things will slow down significantly, I just hope this and chapter 4 are not too fast paced.

I hope you are all enjoying the story so far and it is not too fast paced.

I just added three sketches to chapter one, I still think they are amazing from Voodoo again. I'm working as fast as I can to get chapter 2 up but just making sure that it's ready, hopefully for each chapter I can eventually add sketches as well.

I have some chapters written up on this story but I was hoping some editor could step up and help me get them posted faster. Just send me a PM

I have been working on this story for a while and even though it has several chapters I decided to just put up Chapter One and see what you all think. I will admit I'm not the best at grammar but I do try. Any comments, suggestions, constructive criticism is welcome. Any rude comments are not.