• Member Since 1st Sep, 2012
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Berattande


Stay a while, and listen. It's time for a story with old Berattande.

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Well over one thousand years ago, when Luna was still young (for an alicorn) the two royal sisters ruled from the castle atop the hill in the beautiful Everfree Forest. However, all is not right in these picturesque woods. An evil presence is noticed, and neither of the goddess-princesses can figure out where it's coming from. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that they rarely, if at all, interact with the many denizens of their kingdom. Maybe not.

Sorry if you came expecting something really funny, or really dark, or really adventurous and this simply didn't deliver. This is a relatively light hearted narrative about an ancient evil, so I really wasn't sure what to tag it as. Another thing is that I am trying to be as accurate to the possible history of the show as I can. If you notice anything that doesn't mesh with Equestrian history as we know it, leave me a comment. Thanks so much.

Anyways, this is the first pony story I've ever written, so please tell me what I've done wrong.

Chapters (2)