Finally updated.

Also edited the plot a little bit.

Thanks to everyone who replied here. I've taken what you guys have said under consideration, and have made my decision.

In two days time, I will deleting all chapters of Shin Equus Tensei: Episode One...except the first one, as I believe it to be okay enough.

If you want to save the old chapters, this is the time to do so.

Thank you.

As some of you may no doubt be aware, I have written a story called Shin Equus Tensei: Episode One. I then decided roughly a month ago to put it on hiatus and plan it out a bit more, modifying its settings, characters and locations.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37678/Shin-Equus-Tensei%3A-A-World-Without-Light

IT BEGINS

Alternate universe of alternate universe. i.e. not related to Episode One in any way.

(Note: the kanji roughly translates to Shin Megami Tensei)

Also:

The Black Frost appeared around the corner and began its slow, tortuous walk towards Twilight. Suddenly, it spoke in a booming voice.

“Twilight Sparkle…Princess Luna never told you what happened to your brother, hee-ho.”

Twilight found her mouth opening by itself. “The Princess told me enough!” she yelled, “She told me you killed him!”

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"Princess Luna! A mob of fans are gathered outside the Velvet Room. They're demanding the latest novel in your adventure series! We need to act now!"

"Can't this wait, Nameless? I'm busy playing Skyrim!"

1. Thou shalt not scheme treason against Lord Lucifer and Princess Celestia.
2. Thou shalt not betray each other.
3. Thou shalt share the spoils of battle.
4. Thou shalt not reveal nor use thy powers amongst common folk.
5. Thou shalt not worship the false god YHVH.
6. Thou shalt not harm each other, unless it is truly for the greater good.

(Yes, I am still working on Shin Equus Tensei. Hope you can be patient.)

“Wake up, little pony.”
Her eyes snapped—no, hammered open. What…what happened?

Blinding lights, something slamming her against a wall and drawing blood, losing consciousness…that was what had happened. Twilight blinked and reasserted her senses. Right now, she was in an unfamiliar place with her friends nowhere in sight. This was very worrying.

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So the proofreading for Shin Equus Tensei is done (at least to my mediocre standards). I've made a few changes to the story, which I will list some below.

-COMPs have been replaced by upgraded mobile phones. This is because phones are less conspicuous than handheld game consoles with two screens. Also, COMPs are also inconvenient to carry around and harder to use.

-Berry Punch's swearing has been cut down. Too much f-words for my liking.

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Shin Equus Tensei will go on a little hiatus while I proofedit previous chapters and plan the next stages. Sorry for anybody waiting.