Everyone knows about mouth guns being dumb, but personally I consider them to be in the realm of "it's obviously ridiculous, so it's a quirk of the world."
I wanna quick talk about battle saddles though, because that's one of those things where it does need to make a little bit of sense because it's not cartoon logic/physics, it's a matter of practical technology. A lot of battle saddle depictions have them along the pony's sides, like the shafts of a cart.

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The editing process is: reading out loud, realizing it sounds like shit when it's outside your head, and making changes.
I think now that I've written six chapters I have a grasp on what's happening, so I'm gonna go back and try to make my story less fucky to behold. 1 and 2 are significantly better I think, but idk yet. I'll wait and see.
That's all.