For those of you who've been helping me thus far, I thank you for the time and effort put into assisting me with edits.

As of the moment, major edits are done through chapter 2 thanks in no small part to 'emanwe' and his extremely in-depth and easy to follow suggestions.

All other PMs from those assisting me have likewise been gone over and all corrections made.

As we continue to work the fixes. Please allow me to expand on how I'd like fixes pointed out.

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Finished a series of editing runs through Arrow 18, chapter 1.

I'd say nobody has to deal with any more on that first chapter, but SHEESH, I never realized I'd typed up so many akward sentence arrangements. I guess that's what I get for being half-tired in a semi-conductor fab when I started.

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Trying to get it up on EQD, and despite going over it with a fine-tooth comb and throwing a proofer at it, looks like it still needs some work. Since I have a massive number of people following this fic, I'm sure a few (dozen) of you would be willing to go through the story and pick out the errors that are still filling it.

The Pre-reader's commentary is as follows. I've bolded the important section. (I also bolded and Italicized something nifty.)

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I've decided to add an 'OP' track to the story. The track is one I wrote myself.

Harlock's Passage

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Still got a few more micro-ideas to eject from my head. But no real story ideas with him. This one's about a day in the castle with Chameleon's favorite game, Hide N Seek.
Turns out, he'd be Equestrian Grand Champion if it weren't for Luna's centuries of Hide and Seek experience.

'Come out, come out, wherever you are..."

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For Chameleon, the idea that pops into my head is that Celly Wakes up, hears/sees Chrysalis through blurry 'morning vision' (You know how that goes.) Leaps to a conclusion and jumps up as the changeling is making for hell and high water to get away.

Then something trips her. Celestia looks down (up, depending on how she's oriented on the floor) and suddenly the little gray critter jumps up on her chest.

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Had an idea for a character last night.

Given who knows how long Chrysalis was disguised as Cadence, there is every possibility that she might have 'had some fun' with Shining in the days/weeks leading up to the wedding. And that 'fun' went a little further than she would have expected.

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Just noticed this on EQD.
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/05/summer-funimation-project-screenwriting.html#more

I'd love to see Higher Flier adapted for Screenplay, but I don't have the time to do this. The story fits within the rules, save for the screenplay part, considering I wrote the story with the idea that it could behave as an episode between episodes.

Anyone willing to give it a shot?

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She's number one (or two if you count Faust, which I don't.)

Why? Because this episode predates MLP:FiM by a decade.

So I was going through Google Earth on my PC for totally unrelated reasons, and inspecting the terrain and panoramo photos when I noticed how the forested mountains and hills of western colorado pretty much waltzed right up to massive areas of high desert terrain.

Then suddenly, it clicked, and I scrambled all over western and southwestern colorado examining terrain features, noting panoramo photos, and compared how things looked.

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