So I got a interesting private message today advertising a new chapter of a story I placed in my favorites a long time ago. It warned my email and sent me back to this site. Although I wasn't interested in the story, I did find what I was working on for about a month or two: Youth Hillside and Relentless Space. And I couldn't believe what I was reading. The whole plot of the story didn't bother me it was how I wrote it. Not only was it bad(Wasn't that bad), but what I was writing sounded