Adult Humor Mia Culpa · 5:29pm Jul 23rd, 2012
As many of you may have seen, Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs was forcibly given a Mature rating, due to excessive adult humor. I know exactly where I crossed the line too.
As many of you may have seen, Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs was forcibly given a Mature rating, due to excessive adult humor. I know exactly where I crossed the line too.
I finally finished one of my first stories! Out of all the funny chapters I've written for all my stories, the third chapter of this story is the only time I've actually laughed out loud while writing. I think it's that funny and if you're a fan of the first two chapters of Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs, then this story is definitely worth a read. Please enjoy!
On Youtube, Atylonisus has done a fanfic reading of L&BBOJ, and it sounds awesome! I'm blown away by how this story continues to affect people. I promise I will have another chapter of the story up soon. In the meantime, feel free to listen to or read along with Atylonisus as he presents Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs!
Things were so much simpler when I exclusively wrote clop. Starting out by writing exclusively Mature-rated clopfics, my stories weren't as widely read on this site. I had a relatively small group of regular readers who I could chat with and respond to all their comments,
I'm really blown away. In a 48 hour period, this story reached:
2,515 total views
330 favorites
183 likes
Thank you everyone! The feedback was pouring in faster than I had time to answer it.
As is the case with most of my stories, what started out as a simple idea has grown into its own entity.
To everyone waiting for the next update to my stories, I promise that I'm working on them. I feel like the chef who has too many pots going.
I consider myself to have made many strides as an author since my first story, Swingerville. I started writing because I had ideas for scenarios that no one else was doing.
Why can't the unicorns use magic to get out of their situation? Every fanfic depicting a unicorn in peril has to explain why they can't just magically escape. It's the MLP fanfic equivalent of the scene in horror movies showing the cellphone losing its signal.
"A wave of pleasure washed over her body." "Waves of pleasure flowed through his body." Describing and orgasm or lesser sexual stimulation as a wave of pleasure has become rather old hat; and I'm just as guilty of it as anyone.
There are plenty of substitutes for pleasure: "bliss, euphoria, joy."
The hard part was finding a substitute for wave. A quick Google search found me several good options.
If you feel I am using your art unfairly, or would rather not have your art associated with fanfiction of a mature nature, please contact me via my user page.