I have made a revision after feedback on the first chapter after publication... nothing extremely different, just a decent number of adverb fixes, paragraph arrangements and word choices for better clarity, imagery and readability.

Second chapter will be out in hopefully a month.

Thanks to anyone reading this,
spectrumsprint, amateur fanfic writer

For the sparingly few people who are following me at the moment (and the one or two that are genuinely intrigued), I haven't quite given up yet. College is busy.
I've been sitting back, re-reading repeatedly and fixing things here and there. If discerning eyes can find fault with my work, you can bet I'm taking my time revising.
Hoping to make something great.

Well, it's finally done and done. The first chapter at least. Yes, there's an alicorn and draconequus OC in there. I hate to be that guy, but that just urges me not to follow in the footsteps of over-eager writers that spam their OC fantasies and to instead produce quality work.

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We're getting close!

-Added more descriptions / Omitted some clunky, unnecessary stuff
-Made the new government of Equestria seem more mysterious (current intentions tentative)
-Made major adjustments to the Royal Guard scene
-god damn it i need a name for the fic

Introduction/Fic Description

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Second Revision Notes:
-better description of Rosetown
-various typo fixes
-fixed some shit with Daybreak's scene
-added potential intro/fic description
-changed Reverie's appearance (mint green body and light green mane is kiiiinda boring)

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The following is the first, extremely rough draft of a potential upcoming fanfiction which as of now is untitled.
Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

Episode 1: Clamor's Gift / "Happy Birthday, Reverie." (Title, tentative)

“You must flee from Canterlot. Run, and hide! Quickly!”

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