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  • 605 weeks
    Revision Deux Complete

    I have made a revision after feedback on the first chapter after publication... nothing extremely different, just a decent number of adverb fixes, paragraph arrangements and word choices for better clarity, imagery and readability.

    Second chapter will be out in hopefully a month.

    Thanks to anyone reading this,
    spectrumsprint, amateur fanfic writer

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  • 610 weeks
    Still Writing

    For the sparingly few people who are following me at the moment (and the one or two that are genuinely intrigued), I haven't quite given up yet. College is busy.
    I've been sitting back, re-reading repeatedly and fixing things here and there. If discerning eyes can find fault with my work, you can bet I'm taking my time revising.
    Hoping to make something great.

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  • 614 weeks
    Finally Submitted!

    Well, it's finally done and done. The first chapter at least. Yes, there's an alicorn and draconequus OC in there. I hate to be that guy, but that just urges me not to follow in the footsteps of over-eager writers that spam their OC fantasies and to instead produce quality work.

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  • 616 weeks
    (Sorrow of Dreamers / Reverie / Insert Other Name) Revision the Third.

    We're getting close!

    -Added more descriptions / Omitted some clunky, unnecessary stuff
    -Made the new government of Equestria seem more mysterious (current intentions tentative)
    -Made major adjustments to the Royal Guard scene
    -god damn it i need a name for the fic

    Introduction/Fic Description

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  • 617 weeks
    Untitled Adventure Chapter 1 Second Revision

    Second Revision Notes:
    -better description of Rosetown
    -various typo fixes
    -fixed some shit with Daybreak's scene
    -added potential intro/fic description
    -changed Reverie's appearance (mint green body and light green mane is kiiiinda boring)

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23rd
2012

Finally Submitted! · 8:16am Aug 23rd, 2012

Well, it's finally done and done. The first chapter at least. Yes, there's an alicorn and draconequus OC in there. I hate to be that guy, but that just urges me not to follow in the footsteps of over-eager writers that spam their OC fantasies and to instead produce quality work.

At this moment, I'd like to thank everybody on /mlp/ who supported this endeavor. Without their encouragement, this fic would have never happened. A few friendly anons also helped with proofreading and editing.
A special thanks to Chance for being there for me right at the start.

I anticipate there being 3 "books" that outline the three main story arcs of this tale. I am not certain how often I can write chapters but we'll see. I strongly believe in quality over quantity and as such, if something is drastically wrong or if you have any general suggestions or feedback about my work, be brutal about it. Stay constructive, but I want crap to be revealed for what it is: crap, so I can avoid making the same mistakes later (or edit them in the story).

But above all, please enjoy the story. I've worked pretty hard on it, and would love to hear what you think of it.

PS: This blog contains early drafts of the first chapter. Avoid if you don't like spoiler-ish things. Keep in mind that nothing is set in stone yet (except the official first chapter, for the most part).

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