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Veridian Phantom


Thunder Dash is my name, and writing is my game. (Sorry no, that's incorrect, it's actually music). But I do enjoy writing on the side.

Sep
5th
2012

The surprise hint, and the chapter 4 post. · 1:01pm Sep 5th, 2012

It's up, i finally finished it, my proof reader got back to me today so i got to school early (college) to edit and upload. Enjoy! (and sorry for the major delay)

Hint: That's nor the normal singer in the first song.

If you can guess who it is, you win. Maybe a skype call with me? or... how about this.

First one to guess can ask any 3 questions, and i will have no choice but to answer.

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Aug
31st
2012

A surprise lies in wait... · 5:00am Aug 31st, 2012

I know i'm just being mean by giving you a heads up, chapter 4 is going to contain a surprise none of you will of have thought i'd do. THUS making it that much better IMO, also too, it's why the story update is a little slow

(not because i'm lazy)

P.S. Future chapters may be encompassed by either surprises or slow progress due to Guild Wars 2 being out.

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Aug
26th
2012

Chapter 3 is up. · 2:41am Aug 26th, 2012

Yeah, one week is a long time, but my proof reader is busy, so i got my mother who is an amazing writer to proof read instead, i'd imagine you'll all like this next chapter.

Aiming for: Featured!

Let's get that goal!

(it's my goal in life to be famous for at least SOMETHING in my life. Even if just famous in fanfics for MLP.)

*sigh*

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Aug
21st
2012

Chapter 3 is coming · 3:57am Aug 21st, 2012

Yeah, little slow, but some days i just don't feel like writing, and when i try, i stare blankly at the screen.

This is just a note to say that it won't be long, and i'm currently working on it.

if you're confused about something in the story, just PM and ask.

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Aug
14th
2012

It's time for a surprise. · 7:32am Aug 14th, 2012

Boo yeah! i got inspired again, by.

Room 213, a Whirring Gears story. Anyone interested to find out?

Read both! hahaha, i hope he sees this.

But yeah, surprise for all of you, and it's 10X better than my other stories, one reason being that the proof reader ACTUALLY TOLD ME WHAT I NEEDED TO FIX.

crazy huh? anyway without further adieu: The Master Cellist

*clapping*

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Aug
7th
2012

Less rage inducing blog, so here's a story i recommend you read. · 3:03am Aug 7th, 2012

A good friend of mine, who i know in real life posted a story a while back, he's good friends with Kody910 as well the lucky bugger.

anyway here's the link to his story, it may be formatted weird, and a little rushed. but it's got good premise.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30793/Tomorrow%27s-Edge

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Aug
7th
2012

EQD just dissapoints... · 1:54am Aug 7th, 2012

Apparently they don't like 2nd person fics as they are more wish-fulfillments however, it's a 2nd person fix in which you are the pony Thunder Dash (my OC)

MEANING IT'S NOT WISH-FULFILLMENT.

I have lost all faith in what EQD refers to as "good reading"

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Aug
6th
2012

Okay EQD don't dissapoint... · 9:23pm Aug 6th, 2012

Mhmm just like the title says, the reason it says that is because i submitted "The Mare to Heart" unfortunately, "I Remember" was disapproved because they think my native language isn't english (which it is, i'm canadian). And that it was "Show not Tell" which makes no sense, it's a story not an object.

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Jul
31st
2012

welp, that's it i guess... · 5:28am Jul 31st, 2012

i've written the stories i wanted to write, had small fan base, considering there's not many of you, and you all liked my stories despite a few mistakes here-and-there. Thank you to all, i may write more in the future, but i'm all out. I'm currently in the works of a song, but it's long from completion, and possibly a PMV of the song in the long away future.

thank you for the support, my 15 minutes of fame seems to be up.

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Jul
26th
2012

AAAWW yeeaaah! · 8:05am Jul 26th, 2012

Chapter 6, the final chapter, is up!! I'm sure you'll enjoy it, especially with a bit of added music, it was amazingly fun to write, i enjoyed writing this for everypony that was patient and loving of this story. I'm aware it's not of best quality, but it's the content that counts, not so much the grammar, punctuation, and spelling in my opinion.

HOWEVER. If said story is unreadable or like grade 2 writing then it's unacceptable, regardless of my opinion. :\

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