Hey everypony, just here to let you all know that the edits and revisions for chapter 2 are now finished and up on the site. Just like with the first round of updates, expect fixes to both both paragraph structure and streamlining, to make reading a bit easier, as well as some corrections to basic factual errors (Luna speaks in Early Modern English not in Middle English). However, this time around, I've re-added a scene I had cut between Starry and Matthias that highlights both her character

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Hey, everypony! Just giving you all a heads up that the revamps and edits I promised last blog post for the earlier chapters in A Dance Amongst the Stars have begun, starting with A Pocketful of Sunshine. It was my first attempt ever at a fic, and yeah, it kinda showed. What with the copious amounts of grammatical errors and poor paragraph/sentence structure. But with the help of Mystic Cipher and you wonderful people, I feel

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Hey, everypony!!! So... yeah, it's been kind of a while since chapter 3 dropped, so I figured I'd give you all a heads up as to what's been going on in the near nine months between updates. In no particular order, my dad broke his leg, a major shift in classroom structure and direction happened in the school I teach at, had a slight nervous breakdown, Monster Hunter World, passed a kidney stone, forgot my birthday, my grandma fell and broke her wrist, God of War, another goddam kidney stone,

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Hey everypony just wanted to give you all a heads up about the next chapter. First, some bad news. For those of you waiting for Twilight’s chapter you're going to have to wait a little longer. But the good news is you'll still be getting an update soon. You see I wanted to write a scene setting up for Twilight’s introduction, but my "show don't tell" tic wouldn't leave me alone and it turned into 9,000+ words of May with Luna, and I don't want almost a quarter of a chapter that is supposed to

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Hey everybody thanks for all the likes, follows, and general support for my story, it means the world to me! So I've just finished "The Shitty First Draft" for chapter 2 and am about to start the massive overhaul to turn the incoherent mess into something readable. Hopefully it should be completed by the end of the week, but if not, I'll be on vacation the first week of July so it'll definitely be finished by then. Again, thanks for all the positive feed back and I hope it will meet your

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