So through book 1, we've seen the thestrals in action and their sacrifice to stay autonomous but little is seen of their fight against the Agents of Shadow. Now from what I've read and seen of other books like Warhamer 40k to name one, you cannot really add too many characters to a story in a way that will not confuse readers or adds too much of a tangent to give purpose. So, as with Land of the Rising Sun story which has Twilight Sparkle going to foreign lands that will have a show up in book

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Well I'd say this was quite a fun trip to take, I thoroughly enjoyed doing this little writing and have plans for book 2. I will be going through all chapters to fix grammar mistakes of course. Its been a quietly received fanfic and I also made some artwork for it on a devart account. All in all as long as it is being read by others I'm happy, comments are just garnish to a finished meal and I'd rather not have forced ones either. Gotten good ratings for it too go figure? Well, I wonder what is

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Okay well next chapter will conclude Twilight's involvement and explains why she was so willing to help the sirens. We also have Sunset's meeting with her human version, and a little left on the cabal of Yellow Tail. Stay tuned, next chapter for S.R. coming Christmas Morning hopefully. You'll like it.

Now I'm not a brony, I enjoy the mythos that expands fan fiction mind you. Thus I'm doing away with the Legend of the Everfree and incorporating its beginnings into the story, but everything is going towards the great resurgence of the Demons. In addition, the source of magic in humans will come in a unique fashion before Book 2. Stay tuned for the chapters to come which I hope will extend to Chapter 50.

Good news is I can now type almost as good as I use to, still some lock up when I type for a period of a few minutes but the nerve has started to regrow well. The next chapter is done, but as I mentioned before alot of editing to do and my hand ain't helping it very well.

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Suffered a Radial Nerve Palsy in my good hand so typing with only good one which takes a good long time and that's the draft. Its aggravating because I have so much to type and submit.

Till then, how has the story progressed for you readers? Any improvements you'd like to say?

So as the story progresses, I've noticed some inconsistencies of my past edits. So I'm going through the older chapters to fix the mishaps I made, and through this post I'll put what has been altered to sound more in tune with the timeline and grammatical errors remedied. Feel free to send me what you think of the story, feedback no matter the side of the aisle as long as it's constructive I'll take it.

Chapter 1- Edited 6.26.16
Chapter 2- Edited 6.27.16
Chapter 3- Edited 6.30.16

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Well new here, couldn't help but join and had a story prewritten for laughs and fun. Figured i'd upload it on here and see what ya'll think. I don't take this seriously, but I'm going through each chapter for issues so expect several uploads in one day. It was fun to make and still in progress.