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  • 242 weeks
    The Siren's Remorse Epilogue has been Posted

    I'm going to have the next chapter posted by the end of this week. With the story finally started the rest just falls into place. I'm not one for simple little end conclusions but one that sorts it all out. Hope you enjoy the heavy focus on SciTwi and Adagio Dazzle.

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  • 261 weeks
    Siren's Remorse Epilogue Due Soon!!!!

    Just so ya'll don't think I'm never keeping up with my blogs, ch.1 soon due. Plot done and the rest is breaking it up into manageable parts for quick reads and hard hitting lore of what I wished I could have written. Stay tuned!!!

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  • 271 weeks
    Editing has failed....

    So after many tries I cannot get the next chapter of The Sirens Remorse edited. I either dislike how the scenes play out or the tediousness of the situation becomes far too drawn out. I hate to say it but I'm just going to end the edits now and produce the epilogue since I gave up trying to complete the story. I adore the Dazzlings and Sci-Twi... but I've given up on the whole series in general

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  • 289 weeks
    Ch. 9 Snag in Editing

    Sorry to those who've been waiting on the update, it seems inconsistency in the long 20k plus word chapter has been pot marking my progress. While I've done what I can to trim it down, I don't have the time to spend a day editing unimpeded. Which leaves me with a fresh mind and creativity each time I jump on it thus consistency becomes marred. Character dialogue also remains to be an issue, too

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  • 300 weeks
    Ch. 9 Edit Due Soon

    Well after chapter 8's revision I went straight to the next one right after it was updated. So far the chapter has taken a drastic turn and much will be changed from what I left up instead of removing from viewing like before. Safe to say things will get interesting for Rarity who eavesdrops on them, and certain things will be made more in depth than I left it. Indeed I wrote far too much detail,

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Mar
14th
2017

Story Arc for Thestrals in The Sirens Remorse · 7:11am Mar 14th, 2017

So through book 1, we've seen the thestrals in action and their sacrifice to stay autonomous but little is seen of their fight against the Agents of Shadow. Now from what I've read and seen of other books like Warhamer 40k to name one, you cannot really add too many characters to a story in a way that will not confuse readers or adds too much of a tangent to give purpose. So, as with Land of the Rising Sun story which has Twilight Sparkle going to foreign lands that will have a show up in book 2, should it be appropriate to have a thestral view of Equestria as the ones who handle the dirty work and give light to the horrors they face and constantly keep watch on to prevent catastrophe?

In all, the thestrals are a reclusive guard population, it was noted that they live in the mountain of Canterlot Palace. Asking to be kept secret to Twilight who wants to share their presence with the world, they operate in a closed off society so their enemies which are numerous do not exploit anything. Their main foe, the Agents of Shadow who are worshipers of the demons and dark fell powers constantly try to amass weapons and attack Equestria, only to always be thwarted before they could do anything. Who are these rag tag bunch that terrorize the pony kingdom? What is it like for the Night Guard to live and protect ponies and the crown at all hours of the day?

I'd like to make such a story, but what do you who watch me think?

Comments ( 1 )

Bit late... very late... but I'd read that.

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