Hello! I've written a bit more for Shooting Star, but I need help with making sure the chapters are good, grammatically correct, and void of any plot holes! Here are the requirements and preferences of anyone who wishes to have early access/provide feedback for upcoming chapters of Shooting Star:

Gmail (Required)
Constructive feedback/suggestions (Required)
Read the rest of the story beforehand (Required)
Extensive knowledge of the MLP show (Preferred)

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Wow! I never expected a first chapter to get so much great feedback right away! Thanks to everyone that read and reviewed, it made for a great birthday