Hello! Sorry it's taken me a bit to get back to you. Been crazy busy. I think part of it was the way you handled Apple Bloom " coming out " to him and the evolution of his recognition of his own feelings in return. I also thought you did a great job presenting Apple Bloom's more reserved nature with her raw desire coming through. I also appreciate how you created the contrast between the two sisters and gave us a feel for what it is like for them to further our understanding of AB's personality / character. Even if I thought Apple Jack's scene was way over done and just weird. I honestly almost quit reading until the two main characters ended up at the table together. But I do see why you did all that. Anyway, I hope this answers your question to your satisfaction. Thanks for asking ! I'm pretty new to this site and the first one I've had contact with. Thanks again for the great read and keep up the good work ! Take care, Pariah Pon3
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Sorry it's taken me a bit to get back to you. Been crazy busy. I think part of it was the way you handled Apple Bloom " coming out " to him and the evolution of his recognition of his own feelings in return. I also thought you did a great job presenting Apple Bloom's more reserved nature with her raw desire coming through. I also appreciate how you created the contrast between the two sisters and gave us a feel for what it is like for them to further our understanding of AB's personality / character. Even if I thought Apple Jack's scene was way over done and just weird. I honestly almost quit reading until the two main characters ended up at the table together. But I do see why you did all that. Anyway, I hope this answers your question to your satisfaction. Thanks for asking ! I'm pretty new to this site and the first one I've had contact with.
Thanks again for the great read and keep up the good work ! Take care,
Pariah Pon3
Hey, thanks for faving Spring Is in Bloom! roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/kind-of-yall.png If I may ask, was there anything in particular you enjoyed about that fic?
-Kirb.