Wow! Proofreading and editing are very stressful. Although, very rewarding when the author approves the edits you gave them. When I proof my own work and edit it, it can change quite a bit from the original. When doing this for somebody else... It makes it harder because you want to stay true to the meaning behind their words, even though there might be some grammar mistakes or spelling or whatnot. So finding the right phrasing or structure is tough.

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Post or not to post? I sooo want to post my first story I ever wrote. The alternate ending to Pegasus Device. I have three chapters done. I could probably end there, although that would leave a lot of questions as to what happened to most of the characters and the factory. I have been working on a fourth that goes into that. Problem is, I have hit a wall. I'm not sure of how to get from where it's at to where I want it to go. Not sure I want to post any of it until I have that figured

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I like that people are liking/disliking my short story. I just wish that the dislikes, and likes for that matter, would come with a comment on why. Maybe some tips on ways to improve. Seeing as how I've just started writing, it might help.
I wanted to post my alternate ending to Pegasus Device, but now I'm reconsidering. I'll give this one a little more time and see what happens.

Thanks to those who did like it.

To all, have a good weekend.

Ok, the first FimFiction I read was AuroraDawn's Rainbow Factory. It made this brony cry. I then read Pegasus Device. It gave me hope that Absentia (Scootaloo) was going to make it. Unfortunately, I was mistaken and she ends her own life. I cried, again. Since the ending to Pegasus Device was not what I wanted, I changed it. But, I'm afraid to post it. I've only had one other person read it so far. They liked it, but aren't able to give me any other kind of feedback.

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