Yaknow for the past week I've gotten at least a favorite a day, up to 4 and I look at ratings. Then I notice ratings haven't changed, but if I take up all dislikes and likes and compare them to favorites I still have more faves.

Sooo what you guys waiting till I edit it, to read/vote on it?

Thanks to the help of Broovian15 it seems as if an updated, better detailed, grammatically correct version of Chapter 1 will soon be coming to your desktop!

However it seems it will be slow-coming for which I'll blame him/her's (Pretty sure it's a him) job and the other editors of mine have yet to do anything to it yet sooo..... that and I am quite difficult to get to doing my job and/or edit anything that's mine. So I cannot say anytime soon as to when Chapter 2 and so on will be updated.

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A few of you folks have been good enough to grace me with your time. Some have been even better and pointed out a few flaws or thing I overlooked, ranging from mixing up Sabrina Galloway with another lady, the height of the buildings in Manehattan to even grammatical errors. But this here just tells me I need to fix some things.

Alright, I read through the story and the blackbox, and these are my impressions.

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