Some of you may have noticed that I removed the "Sad" and "Adventure" tags from A Dream of Sunny Days' description. I also shortened the description. This was mainly done to streamline the description and make the story more appealing at first glance. The adventure and sad elements are still there. I simply consider that they're secondary to other aspects. Over time, tags were added and it made the presentation a bit of a mess.

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I don't really have a way to prove it, but according to the number of comments each chapter receives and the feedback I got from multiple readers, I think it's fair to say that Rarity is my most popular POV character. She was probably one of the most challenging to write, but also the most fun, especially at the end. There's a lot more of her scenes coming that I really like.

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The first Fluttershy chapter has been updated. I imagine this will be the last major change to an early chapters. I might fix up other little things, but nothing worth making a blog post about. Hopefully these fixes will make the beginning of the story more appealing to new readers.

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First of all, Chapter V, Shining Armor 1 has been updated. I mostly removed unnecessary fluff and fixed grammar issues.

Now, going over this one, I felt I should address the Crystal Treaty. I had a good conversation about it with my proofreader Coldsilverd while reworking this chapter, and I feel like I should share some of what we talked about with you guys.

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So I now have 186 comments on A Dream of Sunny Days, while the story is 186 186 words long. It took me a while to notice. Funny little coincidence, lol.

I reworked chapter 3, Rainbow Dash 1. As usual, we're only talking grammar and sentence flow, and it's not necessary to go back and read it again. Hopefully this makes it more appealing to new readers, as I did cringe at some of my early mistakes.

Other than that, I feel like these update posts are a bit boring, but I still want to make them. Here's a cool pic about humanized Fluttershy if you guys want something to debate.

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The changes in this one are extremely minor. It was always one of my favorites as far as the early stuff goes, so I just fixed some grammar. I also shortened a few descriptions, but that's about it.

The first Rarity chapter in A Dream of Sunny Days has been updated. I ended up removing around 2000 words from it. As usual, this is mostly technical changes, and there is no need to go back and read it again. This is for the sake of new readers.

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No major changes here, I mostly fixed punctuation and made a few sentences flow better. As with Chapter 1, I hope that this will be the last time I touch it. I also reworked both the first Rarity and Rainbow Dash chapters, but I want one of my proofreaders to take a quick look before I update them.

I'm also hoping that I can release another chapter soon. Fluttershy is next, and you guys will get an explanation for the end of the last chapter.

Some of you might have noticed chapter 1 of A Dream of Sunny Days being reduced by roughly 2000 words. As I said previously, I went through it and made some changes, mostly removing useless exposition and fixing technical issues. I still plan on doing it to chapters 2 to 6, as well as the prologue. As promised, I will not make any changes that require readers to read them again. Important clues I left will remain intact, and no new important information will be introduced.

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