Hope y'all enjoy!

Added the next two chapters, as I had them nearly done upon publication and merely wanted to polish them more before submission. This should satisfy most of you all that this is most assuredly a clopfic.

I just recently published the first chapters of a totally new story, Just His Luck, and it should be available within a few hours.

Applejack loves a stallion who can make her laugh and this is what draws her to Troubleshoes, a clumsy pony who recently learned his true purpose in life. Even after their disastrous first date, she invites him back to her place instead - but his chronic bad luck may be ever-present as things get much closer...

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Added a small deflowering scene to chapter six after learning that equine do in fact have hymens. Doesn't need a re-read necessarily, it just adds more realism to their first time.

After learning that horses indeed have hymens, I added a small deflowering scene to all applicable chapters. In addition, I generally improved my grammar (no more 'and,', except where appropriate.) and punctuation. Hurrah for progress!

I'm having a lot of trouble with the next chapter(s), so sorry for keeping you all for so long. I swear I'm going to work on them more and publish one soon. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.

I just split chapter 1 into 2 parts because I view 9k words in 1 chapter as too long. Nothing much new was added.

I've been working on a new story for almost a week now, and it's about half done. I'm going to be releasing the first few chapters by tomorrow* sometime, then the rest as they're completed.

* - maybe later, not sure.

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Just His Luck

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As it says in the title, this is an announcement that a new chap is up. Enjoy.

Thank you all for 3,500+ views! I'm glad so many have at least chosen to give this story a chance and especially so for those of you who have been here since the beginning, or even the first version of this.

I decided to make the bonus chapters into actual portions of the story line, making them Chapter 11 now. Also, I released the second part of the new chapter now.

Sorry for changing the story so much recently, but I'm taking full advantage of that 'Incomplete' tag as ideas come to me. An author's job is never done, it would seem.