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Commander-Strife


I like to occasionally write story about whatever. SSJ Sunset Shimmer is best Pheonix.

Sep
29th
2015

Remaking of my account and my return. · 11:08pm Sep 29th, 2015

So for a long while I've been inactive, and effectively dead in terms of internet time.

Well after I've regained the urge to write again (since I'm tired of RPing with people since everyone goes poof eventually, or dumps the current story for a new one that starts or plays out identically), so you can expect something in the next week.

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Jun
13th
2015

Whatever happened to "It Was a Pleasure To Burn"? + Update · 9:55pm Jun 13th, 2015

So... I've always kinda liked a certain work of fiction on this site. It was a crossover fic of Starcraft and MLP, and it was called It Was a Pleasure to Burn, which was about a veteran firebat named Caulk who goes through a Xel'Naga warpgate to Equestria, both gates located in caves.

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Dec
13th
2013

Edited A Floor Licker's Story · 7:34pm Dec 13th, 2013

I edited it a bit, adding about 500 words onto it so there's a couple of new or different parts in it now. Mostly around the throne room scene. I also possibly made it a bit more open ended so now I can more easily sequelitis the crap out of it :D

By sequelitis i mean i think i can sequel/prequel about 2 or 3 times to this story instead of maybe 1 or 2.

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Dec
5th
2013

Censorfic... i dunno · 6:11am Dec 5th, 2013

So I've been barely working on a little fanfiction... called Censorfiction. It's kind of a mix of everything on my mind as of late, but it's also kinda odd to read due to the fact there's a few blank spots, or censored spots. It's like as if an O-5 officer from the SCP foundation went at it. Names are [REDACTED] and certain words are... well... Missing. Like ____.

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Nov
14th
2013

Looking for a proofreader · 8:21am Nov 14th, 2013

Mainly for a fic i'll be posting soon after a bit of tweaking i have done tomorrow. I'd like for this proofreader be willing to give me advice as they point out grammar flaws and spelling errors, aswell as having no objections to doing it on the more cloppy parts of the fic.

The last part isn't a biggie, but it would honestly help. Could use maybe more than one, i honestly don't care, i'd just like some critique on my work so far.

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Nov
8th
2013

Unusre of what to write next · 10:38pm Nov 8th, 2013

I'm actually rather unsure of what I should write next.
I feel like writing maybe another chapter of my Short story and no longer refferring to it as such but i'm not usre if it'd be any good.
Either that or some other story. I rather like doing the simple sort of story so I'll probly keep doing that.

What do you guys think? regardless of who reads this, what do you think i should do? I'm honestly highly unsure of What to do.

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