Fallen Angels Revisions List -- Part 1 · 6:17am Dec 26th, 2014
Most of my revisions have been to flow and punctuation, which I won't include in this blog, though I consider them major improvements to the look, feel, and wannabe-professionalism of the story. I'll also skip mentioning most of the more minor tweaks to language (having to do with things like Would Sweetie/Fluttershy/Twilight really have phrased it that way? or Does that leave readers with the most accurate impression?)
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