An in depth analysis of why Sombra [spoiler] · 12:32pm Jan 10th, 2014
So after reading about the fimfiction editorial and a comment on my most popular story, I thought id try my hand at analyzing my work.
So after reading about the fimfiction editorial and a comment on my most popular story, I thought id try my hand at analyzing my work.
Well it was bound to happen, Im going away for a few weeks to join the Roosevelt crew and wont be able to upload. I'll try to write on my down time so I have something to show when I get back but right now im just TRYING to ignore how nervous I am 8D see yall later!
Dusty's tale is (nearly) at an end, so I want to get a general response for my first fully finished story. Did I keep it entertaining? Was I too obvious? Did I do generally well? What do you the readers think?
I kinda made something short because I loveloveLOVE the Attack on Titan anime. Does anyone think Attack should have ponies...? If so I might get my obsession out here, it not then I'll just keep it for lols
Was writing on my phone and accidentally published early.....again.....FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Sorry to say but I just cant continue this because its somethng I dont like anymore. While I write this on my phone in the back of a cargo van please forgive any typos. Im removing the last two chapters and im makeing it a lot longer in the end, so thank you for staying with me and even though I didn't look, im sure I lost a few people.
TL; DR
Removing chapters because I can do better , please disregard current events
Okay maybe a little...right now i'm bring sidetracked by an old story and me having a mind blowing revelation on how I can do justice to my first character and(as a writer so its not creepy.avi) friend. Hay, that's what happens when you sit on an idea and expand on it for three years :T
So sorry for not updating anything but I am still crawling along with chapters, just slowly.
I still cant believe i've hit this mark. Im having an amazing time writing and getting the great feedback and im only getting better, thanks again for your continued support and I hope you enjoy the next two projects I have coming soon once I get to my 'official' halfway-mark on CotD. Also once I hit 500 im thinking of getting a commission for a better title picture, suggestions?
Fan made and approved for business; go join the new group just for Kiss of the Dark. Check out other endings or stories based off of the incredible story by Soothing Stone. Here it is! and I hope to see a lot more people keep this ball rolling. As always thank you or the support.
-Signing off imperial0909-
I was taking some time to review another story of mine but looking over it...I missed a few key points that altered the story to the point of paradox and it had been far to long without a change so Im deleting it. Of course I would be failing the first character ive ever created if I abandoned him so im going to rewrite (for the fifth time) Harmony at War so I might divert from Child of the Dark during the week and make CotD weekends depending. Thanks for the support and remember that I aim to