I want to keep going with The Price of Wings... kinda.

See, I recently stumbled on the old notes I had for the story and realized that the final chapters were... never really written down. I had ideas but I figured I'd get them down later, after writing the rest of it.

The thing is, it would be a LONG story to finish it all.

But I still DO want to finish it.

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I'm working on the latest chapter. I am sorry it's been taking so long. I swear I did not mean for this to go on for this long with no updates. If I can juggle things right I will update more often.

That being said, if anybody would like to help me proofread these that would be appreciated.

If not, I'll proofread them myself, like usual, and they will be the typical crap they usually are and so be it.

Just in case anybody was curious, yes I am working on the latest chapter of The price of Wings, I'm proofreading it right now. I got a good method for it too. I put the text in a text-to-speech program and let it read the thing to me. Seriously, I've been over the chapter so many times that's the only way I can go over it, either one painstakingly piece at a time, or by listening to it. It's a good way to get a feel for if a paragraph flows well or not... er, I think so anyway, it IS a

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ACCUSATION: That Celestia has allowed a little Pegasus Filly with a crippling disability to remain in that state without using her powers to heal her. (AKA, why has Celestia not healed Scootaloo?)

RESPONSE: Manifold... in 3 basic parts. "healing", "powers", "disability"

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It has been a year and a half since chapter 4 of TPOW was posted, to anybody that was waiting though, the wait is over. I've finally finished the chapter and am now on the proofreading stage. Also, I got the advice that if I want to write better, I need to read good books. So I've started re-reading Harry Potter book-5.

Currently the chapter is a good 27 pages long.

Continuing with the accusations and response, we have Celestia's handling of the Nightmare Moon situation.

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So, there are a lot of Celestia haters out there, each for their own reasons, I for one am not one of them. The problem is, well, when someone is filled with hate, or anger, or almost any emotion for that matter, their IQ tends to drop, their ears tend not to work, and they often assume that anyone arguing against them in any way is not only absolutely wrong but is in absolute opposition and making a personal attack against them. Exactly how they come to that conclusion I have no idea.

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So, anyway I was watching... well, I was watching THIS (warning, language) and I decided to post a comment... a comment with over 31 lines. Doi, when I start working on headcanon, I go with a whole head-HOWITZER!

My comment I copy and paste here...

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Hey alls, just a little update here, been a little bit since I posted last.

Anyway, as anybody reading the latest chapters probably has guessed, chapter 5 of TPoW will feature my take on the Hearth's Warming Eve Pageant. Though, it shouldn't be called pageant as a pageant is a play-within-a-play kind of thing and only makes context in the show, otherwise it is simply a play and everypony's looking around thinking "where's the play it's supposed to be inside of?"

Except Pinkie of course.

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I first put this up on a forum with references so I'll have to alter it as I go so it makes sense

finally got it up, hopefully it'll go all the way (it's a 2 parter and I couldn't see a link for part 2 yet so hopefully I get both parts).

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