"Staring at everything but seeing nothing..." I see what you did there

hmm one elmemt dead and another crazy . this would be the perfect time for discords return .

Twilight is dead? Meh.

"...and that's how I was named!" Applejack looked up, confused. "Wait, ah thought you were just talkin' about the cupcakes you and Rainbow Dash made yesterday." Pinkie Pie also looked confused. "I was?" she asked. "I don't remember saying that. Do you want me to tell you though? Oh my, silly Rainbow Dash ate so many cupcakes yesterday, she could hardly walk-" "Ah know that, Sugarcube," Applejack said. "Ya jus' told me that." "I did?" Pinkie Pie asked. "Okie Dokie Loki." Suddenly, Pinkie Pie screamed, causing Applejack to jump back. "Oh my - I promised Mrs. Cake I would be back inside in fifteen minutes to help her finish that cake, and it's been a lot longer than fifteen minutes, hasn't it?" Without another word, Pinkie bounced back inside Sugarcube Corner. Applejack thought for a moment. It had been longer than fifteen minutes since Pinkie Pie had came out to talk to her - and it had been over an hour and a half since she had last seen Twilight and Rainbow Dash. What the hay was holding up Twilight? Surely it couldn't take THAT long to talk some sense into Rainbow Dash's head. "Ah guess ah can head over to Twilight's and see what's takin' so long," Applejack said to herself. "Maybe even ah can talk to Rainbow and try to help her." Applejack walked away from Sugarcube corner in the direction of Twilight's library. As she passed through Ponyville, she forced herself not to run. In her stomach, she knew something was wrong but she told herself that if she didnt run, everything would be alright when she reached Twilight's place. After about five minutes, Applejack reached Twilight Sparkle's library. She went to the front door and rapped on it with her hoof, but no one answered. Very worried now, Applejack opened the door - it was unlocked. She went inside the library. "Hello?" Applejack called nervously. "Twilight? Rainbow Dash? Any of ya here?" No answer. Applejack walked into the library and for a moment, she just stood there, unable to believe what she was seeing. Her breath seemed to have gotten stuck in her throat. All she could do was groan in horror. Twilight was dead, that was pretty obvious. The princess was lying on her side in the middle of the room, unmoving, with a small knife sticking out of her right eye like some kind of grotesque tumor. Her side had been slashed open and her intestines were visible. Blood was splattered all over Twilight's body and all over the library floor and some on the bookshelves. As Applejack tried to comprehend what she was seeing, she realized something - there was no sign of Rainbow Dash.

Please work on the spacing in your story.

it was unlocked. She went inside the library. "Hello?" Applejack called nervously. "Twilight? Rainbow Dash? Any of ya here?"

No answer

That would be better