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CONTINUE BRAVO
You know? there is not fun in making up a dilemma or a conflict if the main character can solve it by just taking a piss. I get he is a god like creature now. But didn't you say that his powers were a lot weaker on this dimension?
In any case, you really need to stop giving him magic plot device super power every two seconds that allow him to solve every little problem from a fly on the soup, to an alien invasion. Or else the story will get very predictable and very BORING very soon.
Even so, the torture and sex scene was awesome.
"If you give a pony some hay, he will thank you. But if you give a dragon some magic, he will rule you."
Fix that man. And I'm sure, you'll get a lot more readers.