Check the description, i did have it preread and proofread and even edited on some parts. It's still a work in progress. Care to give me some pointers?
It's nothing too major. You just have some tense issues and a few run-on sentences.
The real issue is the frequency that they appear. Noting against your writing, but If I were in your place, I wouldn't have submitted this yet. That's me though. ever the perfectionist.
Nah, your right. Truth is that i wasn't quite sure to post it just yet, but i got curious at the reactions it would bring. Could you maybe give me some help with editing since the other person i'm working with doesn't have that much time anymore, thnx for the tips anyway.
Nightmare on elm Street classic, though in my opinion and I may be biased about this Friday the 13th and nightmare on elm Street should be tied for the most amount of blood anyone else think that?
I like the story but you really need to get some prereaders and proofreaders on this.
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Check the description, i did have it preread and proofread and even edited on some parts. It's still a work in progress. Care to give me some pointers?
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It's nothing too major. You just have some tense issues and a few run-on sentences.
The real issue is the frequency that they appear. Noting against your writing, but If I were in your place, I wouldn't have submitted this yet. That's me though. ever the perfectionist.
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Nah, your right. Truth is that i wasn't quite sure to post it just yet, but i got curious at the reactions it would bring. Could you maybe give me some help with editing since the other person i'm working with doesn't have that much time anymore, thnx for the tips anyway.
grammer and spelling errors but im enthralled..... is that the right word????
Nightmare on elm Street classic, though in my opinion and I may be biased about this Friday the 13th and nightmare on elm Street should be tied for the most amount of blood anyone else think that?