Adventures of Doctor Whooves

by SuppaNova

Chapter 1

Snow was falling in good old London town, which always seems to bring up memories of a distant past. For one person in particular, it brought back memories of great battles which almost always ended with ash falling over London in the place of snow. The person or rather, the Timelord was none other than the Doctor. His adventures have saved not only London but the World multiple times, but he never got recognized for it or thanked. The Doctor didn’t mind though, he was just happy doing so as long as he wasn’t alone.

The Doctor almost always has a companion or two for his adventures, but they never stayed for long. He just wants someone there to show off to but he also wants to keep them save, but the two never seem to mix. Over the years, the Doctor has lost a lot of companions. The lucky ones got to life the rest of their lives filled with joyous memories with the Doctor; the unlucky…reached a misfortunate end, but the worst one yet can’t remember at all. The memories of all of his old companions always cause his two hearts to ache with great pain. In the back of the Doctor’s mind he knew they weren’t just his companions, they were his friends. Friends that he couldn’t keep forever but wishes he could.
The Doctor looked up to snowing sky and released a heavy sigh. He turned back to his Tardis and unlocked the door and entered. He looked up at the Tardis ceiling and said “Well old girl, we are alone again.”

He looked at the controls and slowly made his way to them. “I suppose I can’t dwell to long on the past. Come one, old girl, take us somewhere brilliant.”

The Doctor pushed all the buttons and pulled all the levers necessary to get the Tardis to do its signature whooshing, and into the Time Vortex. Suddenly, sparks flew from the center of the Tardis form a circle twice, a huge puff of smoke came from the center and the Tardis started to violently shake. The Doctor hung onto the control panel doing all he could to get the Tardis stabilized again. “This can’t be…this can’t be happening again! The Time Vortex couldn’t have disappeared again! “

The Doctor knew what was coming next and braced himself for a crash. As he expected, the landing was rough, which was enough to knock him unconscious for a good hour and a half. When he awoke, he remembered his situation and reluctantly looked over to the control panel. The Doctor expected to find it dark and lifeless as he had once before, to his surprise it was just smoking and slightly dim but overall still alive.

Narrowing his eyes, the Doctor looked away from the control panel and turned his head towards door. He made his way over slowly and opened the door with a soft creak of the wood. Beyond the door, was a distant town and a beautiful land of green grass, trees, and…brightly colored ponies.

The Doctor slowly stepped out of the Tardis, and made his way towards the town. As he was crossing a bridge, the Doctor stopped in his tracks when he realized he felt strange. He looked into the river and was shocked to see a brown pony with a tousled mane staring back.

He gasped and tumbled away from the water, hitting the other side of the bridge. The Doctor hit the railing a little too hard and fell into the river. The Doctor quickly swam to the bank of the river as he plopped onto land belly side down, he noticed something else. Instead of seeing two hands, the Doctor saw two hooves extending from his body. Narrowing his eyes, the Doctor went to see his reflection once again but this time he wanted to see his whole body. He turned sideways along the riverbank, and turned to see a brown pony with a tousled mane and an hourglass on his flank.

The Doctor smile and said “Well, isn’t that cute.” Looking around, He notices the small town again and starts making his way there. “This obvious seems to be an alternate dimension…about ponies. This should be interesting.”

He suddenly stops in his tracks, and starts to pat down his new body in search of his sonic screwdriver. The Doctor suddenly realizes that he isn’t wearing his usual trench coat and turns back to the direction of the Tardis. Opening the door, he sees the sorry state of the Tardis’ interior and frowns. “Sorry old girl, I’ll fix you right up as soon as I learn more about our current location. In the meantime, I’ll just take my sonic and…hmm I might have to leave the physic paper. If I had my coat I could carry both but I don’t want to go through the wardrobe in your state. I suppose that I could go into town and see if they might have something for me there.”

The Doctor reaches over to grab his sonic screwdriver but has some difficultly with his new hooves. After a couple of minutes of struggling, the Doctor decides just to carry it in his mouth. “Ih guessh thiss willh havffe toff dof forh nowsh.”
The Doctor pushes opens the door and looks back to the Tardis, “Ih’llh beff backff, seffxyf.”

He made his way once again towards the town and stopped at the bank of the river. The Doctor laughed at his appearance. He looked rather silly with the sonic in his mouth; it made him laugh harder causing him to drop the sonic into the river. Before he could react a flash of orange jumped into the river after his sonic. As quickly as it dove in, the orange character got out just as fast and handed back the sonic.

“Here’s ya doohickey, wat exatly is it? Ah’m Applejack, wat’s yer name?”. While she was introducing herself, the mare took hold of his hoof and furiously shook it. After regaining control of his shaking hoof he smugly said, “I’m the Doctor.”

Author's Note:

*I tried to recreate the scene with the Tardis like in "Rise of the Cybermen".
If you have any suggestions on improvement, please do not be shy and tell me.

Comments

[254Ddubman]

Indeed, press the 'enter' key between paragraph so your story can be generally organized

[SuppaNova]

Thanks for the tip!
I'll make sure to modify the this chapter and in upcoming chapters.

[Sneedman]

I love Dr. Who, so I say that you should continue this story... but anyways, do put a space in between the paragraphs, and my only other advice is to make the chapters a tad longer... and that should be it, but overall good job so far!

[SuppaNova]

@Sneedman
Thank you!
I am a big fan as well and I plan to use your advice in my next chapter.